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kayjay
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0 posted 2003-03-09 03:25 PM


My plant

I have a plant within my house;
it grows from room to room.
I do not really bother it,
except to watch it zoom.

Nor ary drop to drink, I give,
for water it don’t need.
In fact, I tend it not this plant;
Its blooms I pay not heed.

Perhaps you know this plant described
And maybe you’re like me.
’Tis not a living thing I cite,
But only my debris.

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

© Copyright 2003 Ken Julkowski - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-03-09 03:55 PM


Oh so cute Ken!
Funny how some 'things' just grow and grow on their own.
I've have heard it called a 'clutter plant'.
Thanks for the chuckles on this cold Canadian day!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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2 posted 2003-03-09 03:59 PM




(giggles in delight) Oh my gosh, I know some plants like this, like the kudzu vine! Hehehe, glad we dont have those hungry vines here! (smiles) However, we do have something else that absorbs the water from our state so devastingly quickly; the tamarisk, and that has what has made the drought situation far worse! This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ken, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2003-03-09 04:01 PM


sounds like my son's room, with last years
frenchfries sitting in the garbage pail

kayjay
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4 posted 2003-03-09 04:32 PM


This tale, E and Mistletoe
and Nakedgoddess too
Is only fanciful today
but sometimes it's too true.  
Thank you all.  KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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5 posted 2003-03-09 05:10 PM



Ah, the plant DeBris! How it so suddenly will grow,
and gathers me up leafily, somehow it seems to know...
that if I give it less in time, it seems to give me more,
though I am in much distress, it seems never to find the door!

kayjay
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6 posted 2003-03-09 05:18 PM


My joy in finding little ditties
just jumps in me like scrambling kitties
But when I find your bons most mot
It's rather for your wit I vote.
Thank you Karilea.  :-) KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Connel
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7 posted 2003-03-09 05:24 PM


I really havent seen too many plant poems.. I wish there was more, if they were as good as yours. This was a beautiful write, and I enjoyed every word.

Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart.

kayjay
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8 posted 2003-03-09 06:22 PM


Thank you, Connel for your note.  I think there is a bit of this in all of us, but some keep on top of it better.  Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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9 posted 2003-03-09 07:27 PM


LOL at this plant. Ken, do you talk to it? I talk to my plants, but they are all the kind that ask for food and water.
  

kayjay
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10 posted 2003-03-09 08:12 PM


Dear Midnitesun, you've found me out
I'm one who lives alone.
For days on end I sing and shout
and even maybe moan.
My plant stands mute but hears my raves
In despair I'm hopeless
I threaten it with trips to caves
But it knows I'm copeless.  
Thanks for your chuckles. Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Midnitesun
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11 posted 2003-03-09 08:27 PM


I understand rants and raves. Plants are both giving and forgiving. Keep up the lines of communication.
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12 posted 2003-03-10 02:09 AM


very interesting and thought-provoking
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