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Amature2
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0 posted 2003-03-09 10:56 AM



A moment with you

Is a dream come true
It is a walk in paradise
A frozen moment
Captured in a new Sunrise
Your hair flowing freely
In a tropical breeze
With your delicate touch
My senses you tease
Magical time in a sea of blue
I want to be lost in
A moment with you


"This we know - the Earth does not belong to man - man belongs to the Earth." Chief Seattle

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-03-09 11:16 AM



What a lovely invitation!

littlewing
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2 posted 2003-03-10 03:53 AM


Amature - this is beautiful - lovely - lost in a moment yes - very nice xxoo
DarkSide_Blues
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3 posted 2003-03-10 04:00 AM


Aaah, Wow. That -does- sound inviting. Very lucky person, whomever that was wrote for. ^_^
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2003-03-10 04:01 PM


Enjoyed...James
Ericc
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5 posted 2003-03-10 05:16 PM


Lovely!
Eric

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