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Verses to a Sister |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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To my sister, Margaret, who continues to be an inspiration to all who know her, who throughout her battle with cancer fills every heart with the joy of living, defying nature,time and uncertainty, with laughter and the joy of each moment. As she has since childhood, she makes each day a fun experience. What a beautiful spirit she posesses, but does not recognize. She only sees the beauty in others. I wrote this poem this morning and read it to her over the phone. Her reaction? "Oh gosh, that is beautiful. Is that what you see?"  ~* VERSES TO A SISTER *~ THERE YOU ARE... Treading on dreamlike waters Not knowing the fathoms of depth, But eyes smiling in elation At the currents that rock you In soothing possibilities You splash, and ripples of laughter surround you , spreading out to distant places, lapping the hearts of those whose eyes are crystallized in admiration You duck the taunting waves, facing the power and will of the ocean and win the tug of war with the undertows of uncertainty You frolic in the wetness Savoring the cold waters As you bathe in each fresh moment Your spirit dancing to the rhythms of the moons, mocking time As the silver crescents rise slowly over your delight The night sky shines upon your courage, dusting you with star sprinkles and glimmering moon beams The seas bow to your stature in waves that reach out to their limit kissing and embracing your feet with sea foam And you never see your beautiful reflection in the ripples of joy that emanate from the depths of your being But your loveliness is hovering over the waters And THERE YOU ARE Avoiding a glace into the mirror of your grace I love you, Elizabeth © 3/9/03 ~*~ "Silhouette All images © 1998 S. Thomas Sierak http://www.stsfineart.com/limited.htm [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (03-09-2003 08:12 PM).] |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Elizabeth, This is so outstandingly beautiful. One of your best. Heart touching, beyond words. What a loving, lovely, tribute. Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Beautiful Liz, just beautiful. You are so fortunate to have each other. Hugs, Marti |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I can see why your sister loves you so...  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Pat, Thank you. Words from the fullness of her place in my heart Marti, WE are so fortunae to have the strong binding ribbons of love that have always held us together Sunshine. It's easy to se why I love her so. Thank you |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Elizabeth, this is such a touching write. You are blessed as I am to have a loving, caring sister. hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhLizzy~ This touches me so specially~ Your ribbons of sisterly love bind your hearts together~ 'You splash, and ripples of laughter surround you , spreading out to distant places, lapping the hearts of those whose eyes are crystallized in admiration' *Huglets* to you and to Margaret too~  Thank you for spreading your glow to my heart~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Elizabeth...this is extremely lovely. You and your sister are fortunate to be so close to one another. Take care sweet lady. ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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SexyCowgirl19 Junior Member
since 2003-03-08
Posts 24Colorado, USA |
This is a great poem. I'm sure your sister is happy to have a sister like you. Emma |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
This is so overwhelmingly beautiful. It makes me realize how much my two sisters mean to me. I think I will call them up and tell them that today. Thanks for posting this... I'll say my prayers for your sister and for you the only man worth your tears will never make you cry |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful verses! |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
I know your sister is very happy that you wrote that for her.. She is probably so happy, and will be for a long time now. That was a good thing you did! Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Elizabeth, now you have me flooding in tears, you are a golden-hearted soul just as your sister is and I know she will forever be touched by your words as grace is truly in here just as it is in you and she will always be lucky to have you as her sister who dances with the rhythm of the moons and waltzes in moonbeams and walks upon oceans with her! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, I send healing angel hugs to Margaret in hope her cancer will heal away and angel hugs to you for being such a wonderful friend and, most importantly, a loving soul to your loved ones, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Liz, to have you read this to me over the phone left me speechless, and the residual feelings are only just surfacing now. To never had siblings it is hard to even comprehend the ties that bind, but to see your love of yours firstly makes me sorry I had none, and secondly love you even more than I do already. To have a sister like you must be a wonderful gift, as I know the friendship we have is a treasure. You speak so fondly of her, and I am sure the love you have for each other is a reflection of your Mom too. Here's to Graceland you two!  Beautiful Liz. R.E.S.P.E.C.T. Aretha Franklin [This message has been edited by Mysteria (03-09-2003 07:50 PM).] |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Liz...This is so lovingly filled, it gave me goosebumps. You know, the person in the poem sounded a bit like you, to me. You are both beautiful.  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Sisters... Margaret and Mary Elizabeth... What a wondrous duo.. I feel that I know Margaret through your eyes, your words, and your undaunted zest for life... This is a grand tribute to the bond of sisterhood, my friend... You are blessed... Love to you, dear lady...  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I am so moved by your warm responses to this poem, Martie, I know you have the tenderness of heart that would cause goosebumps. Marge, I believe you could have written this one, for your bonds with sisters are very strong. Sharon, thank you for the photograph, so lovely and appropriate. Nan, your remarks truly warmed my heart, as did all of the lovely comments to this poem. THank you each and every one for your gracious words Liz |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is incredibly beautiful, Elizabeth! *S* I think we all need to see ourselves through a sister's eyes... I hardly recognize myself when I hear my sister's description... but I know I want to be that person she sees. *S* The love shines through this... and adds luster to every word. *S* |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Ruth, Thank you, dear. THere is something very special in the relationship of two sisters that is different from any other -(with the exception of twins, perhaps) I feel so fortunate to have her, HUgs Liz |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Sounds like a wonderful and modest person..and you as well. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Rs, That she is, and coming to visit next week! We're on the geneological trail! Thank you! LIz |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I am here there with you Lizzie, and holding you close to my heart. |
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