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KristieSue
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0 posted 2003-03-09 09:12 AM



Snow capped mountains
Flat Farmland
Expanding Blue Skies
Deep Valleys
Rolling Hills
Each State so different
But so the same
All busy people
hurrying through life
striving through one goal
to get through the day
Forgetting to look
at the beauty around them
Mumbling and grumbling
living in discontent
If they just took
one minute to look
Stars painted on black canvas
Making pictures of creation
Solitude surrenduring peace

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1 posted 2003-03-09 09:25 AM



Lovely, peaceful and wise.


Enjoyed,

Hugs,  Pat

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2 posted 2003-03-09 09:29 AM


Lovely thoughts and images here.
~Hugs & a vote~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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3 posted 2003-03-09 09:32 AM


Execellent,
A very clever and fascinating ryhming pattern

Sperari

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4 posted 2003-03-09 04:24 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Kristie, this is so very sad but true, sweet friend, I feel we will only find peace and love in this world if we can disregard the commerical world and slip back into the pastoral lifestyle where beauty is all around us and appreciate the simple pleasures and blessings! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this has my sunflower vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2003-03-09 05:51 PM


You are so right. There is so much beauty to be enjoyed and it is FREE, creation's gift.
Beautiful.
Margherita

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6 posted 2003-03-09 05:57 PM


Kristie - this is just gorgeous - realized this the other day - had to learn it from my three year old - TY - xxoo
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7 posted 2003-04-16 10:43 AM


This is nice...everyone needs this reminder!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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8 posted 2003-04-16 12:42 PM


Thanks you guys!  I wrote that on the way home from Washington State a few years ago.  I was in the Greyhound....Amazing what you see when you sit back and observe....

Glad y'all enjoyed it...

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

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9 posted 2003-04-22 11:02 PM


Great poem

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
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10 posted 2003-04-23 01:30 PM


wow! a beautiful write lady! *click*
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