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Cassie
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0 posted 2003-03-09 01:35 AM


Sometimes it is just so great
And I can't hardly wait

Somtimes it's like you just don't care
To me you are not fair

You treat me like a model, a queen
Wanting, hoping, selfless, caring

Weight bearing
and
Life sharing

Other times I feel like I'm not good enough
Your too tough, selfish, and careless
Not wanting, not listening, or responding
And we're not bonding

I try to make you happy
It only seems to last so very few
Oh if you only knew

You make me so hopeful
And
Then you let me down

You confuse me
I disagree
But to you I apologize


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1 posted 2003-03-09 01:38 AM


Sounds like love

           
R.E.S.P.E.C.T.
Aretha Franklin  

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2003-03-09 01:40 AM


I know how this feels....
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