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Cassie
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0 posted 2003-03-09 01:13 AM


Missing out
Leaving you behind

Letting you down
Hearing you cry

I try

I know you just can't wait

Looking forward to seeing me
Looking forward to seeing you


© Copyright 2003 Cassie - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-03-09 01:50 AM


neat write...thanks for sharing
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2003-03-09 12:55 PM


Cassie~
A tiny breath of emotion ... delicately exhaled~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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regards2you
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3 posted 2003-03-09 05:49 PM



Cassie,

This could cover many situations.

Enjoyed.

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

icequeen
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4 posted 2003-03-09 06:18 PM


yes... I get lots of images from this. Very nice!

the only man worth your tears will never make you cry

Connel
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5 posted 2003-03-09 06:55 PM


OOOO.. I love it!

Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart.

Kethry
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6 posted 2003-03-09 07:31 PM


perfectly done!
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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