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ShaolinsOnlyPoet
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0 posted 2003-03-09 12:37 PM




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One day my soul just opened up
and things started happenin`
things I cant quite explain
I mean
I cried and cried like never before
I cried tear of ten thousands mothers
I couldnt even feel anything because
I cried until I was numb.

One day my soul just opened up
I felt this overwhelming pride
What I was proud of
only God knows!
Like the pride of a hundred thousand fathers
basking the glory of their newborn sons
I was grinnin` from ear to ear!

One day my soul just opened up
I started laughing
and I laughed for what seemed like forever
wasnt nothin` particulary funny goin` on
but I laughed anyhow
I laughed the joy of a million children playin`
in the mud
I laughed till` my sides ached
Oh God! It felt so good!

One day my soul just opened up
There were revelations, annihiliations, and resolutions
feelings of doubt and betrayal, vengeance and forgiveness
memories of things I`ve seen and done before
of places I`d been, although I didnt know when
there were lives I`d lived
People I`d loved
battles I`d fought
victories I`d won
and wars I`d lost.

One day my soul just opened up
and out poured all the things
I`d been hiding
ans denying
and living through
that had just happenend moments before.

One day my soul just opened up
and I decided
I was good and ready!
I was good and ready
to surrender
my life
To God.

So, with my soul wide open,
I sat down
wrote him a note
and told him so.  


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GOOD! That's awesome!
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