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Open Poetry #25
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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace
0 posted 2003-03-09 12:09 PM

Hot Notes

I listened
to rainbows
dripping color
down on
hot tin
and the
rhythm sizzled
with hues
sliding forward


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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2003-03-09 01:54 AM

awesome imagery!
BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2003-03-10 12:59 PM

Your poetry sizzles and burns onto the page no matter what you write.  

This reminded me of the movie
Cat on a Hot Tin Roof~
Cpat Hair
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since 2001-06-05
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3 posted 2003-03-10 05:47 AM

very nice.. imagery and a touch of sensual...

I enjoyed
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