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Open Poetry #25

Split Decision::Poem

LastMoments
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since 2003-03-07

Posts 92

0 posted 2003-03-08 11:42 PM

It was so close
Undefinable my words
As whispers had no shape
No subject to proceed

Have you ever reached so deep inside
You forgot who you are
You leech the final recollection
That streamed like falling stars

The night consumed so many forms
The raining in my head
That drops like breaking shards of life
That can't seem to fit again

I hear the ringing, staying sharp
It can't release the tightened grip
That takes over what I live
And pollutes me to be nothing

I fell to the underbrush
To hold on to what is left
To consider the final edge
What lies before you, a last resource

Yourself being the only one
That breaks through everything else
The only one reliable
For becoming what you are

Yourself; a split decision on its own

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-03-09 01:55 AM

very thought-provoking

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

2 posted 2003-03-09 09:39 AM

LastMoments,

I liked this a great deal. Deep and could feel it.

Enjoyed greatly, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

sperarifraai
Member

since 2003-03-06

Posts 65
Ireland

3 posted 2003-03-09 09:43 AM

Powerful imagery

Sperari

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