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DarkSide_Blues Junior Member
since 2003-03-08
Posts 41Fl, Usa. |
Hello. This is my first post here. I know Connel IRL and he told me about this place, and kidnap-- ..er...told...heh..me to come join up and post some stuff. Nice to meet ya'll. o_O I don't concider myself much of a writer, but i'll be happy to comment, and give some stuff to read. ^_^ Shades of Gray. Truth never amounted to rhythms so sane, Justice became just a safe way to blame, Finding the right path in worlds of change, Evolving, Deforming, Remaking the sane. Nothing is sacred, not held in the light, To blind the unbreaking, you spit in it's sight, Two wrongs are both wronged, but it all came out right, It's the plague of such balance, for day to be night. Such is a human, both parts of that whole, Evil to ego, a struggle of soul, A battle of morals, your conscience the toll, The Divine to the Devil, both colored as coal. I've saw no savior inside wood or stone, Just release me of chains, i'll find him alone, To creation, not man, will I try to atone, To be living, not wishing, not alive on a loan. Thanks! Ja ne. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Welcome to Passions!!!! Very good for a first post. Loved the way you expressed your feelings. Awesome write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Very nice st... I mean blues..  . And it only took you 3 centuries to post! lolWelcome. I know your going to love it here. The people are so nice, and PIP has so many features. If you have any questions, ask one of us moderators on the forum to help ya, We'll be more then happy to help ya out! Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart. [This message has been edited by Connel (03-08-2003 10:29 PM).] |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Welcome to Passions!!!! With this being the talent you have been given by Creation, I very much look forward to your next post. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, DarkSide...I hope you find that Passions is everything you think it might be... Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Darkside - Welcome to PIP - love the name - this is great - love this: Evil to ego, a struggle of soul, Keep posting xxoo |
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DarkSide_Blues Junior Member
since 2003-03-08
Posts 41Fl, Usa. |
Thank ya'll for the replies, and thanks very much for the card! O_O That was cool. I think i'm going to really enjoy my stay here. ^_^ Hajimemashite, douso yoroshiku! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Welcome to Passions! Interesting write. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Stephen, this is a fabulous debut, sweet friend, living is what we must do and stop questioning and wishing it was, that is the real atonement, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Stephen, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Stephen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Welcome to Passions! I enjoyed this first post, and love the title! |
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DarkSide_Blues Junior Member
since 2003-03-08
Posts 41Fl, Usa. |
Just figured out how to use the library. lol |
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