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the_loner_23
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0 posted 2003-03-08 09:54 PM


We went exploring
Looking for new places
We found a waterfall
And decided to explore it

We went behind it
And there was a cave
We had a picnic with us
And set it up

We sat behind the waterfall
Looking at the beauty
As it fell
Over the side

We looked at each other
And kissed
And one thing
Lead to another

The love we made
Behind the waterfall
In the cave
Was perfect
And it was in the view
Of a beauty of nature
Behind the waterfall

As the water fell
The love we made
Grew more intense
Until we both held to each
Other
And said, "I love you."

Behind the waterfall

Cold hands means a warm heart

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Saluting with misty eyes
1 posted 2003-03-08 09:57 PM


He is truly a lucky man. Great write.
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2 posted 2003-03-08 10:06 PM


I wanna go behind the waterfall :pout: You make it sound so fun.

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        remeber me

ThunderMage
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3 posted 2003-03-08 10:47 PM


Your poems are almost as beautiful as you Julie.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2003-03-09 02:06 AM


I need to find a place like that!
rkcraig
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5 posted 2003-03-09 03:06 AM


you're truly lucky
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