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Ceinwyn
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0 posted 2003-03-08 09:26 PM


31 Dec 00

I'll offer you my soul
For your friendship in return
I'll even hand you the key
If you can help me to understand
My unfolding destiny
I'll even accept your friendship laced kiss
If you can keep all of my wishes a secret
I'll even clean up the mess that clutters my heart
So you can have a place to sit
And fall asleep
When all is not well
I'll be your haven, if you'll be mine
I would even cradle you in my heart
For a lifetime
Never letting you fall
And I will always come running
Whenever you call
If only you cushion my heart as well
When you see it beginning to fall
And come running whenever I call...


Don't know if this sounds good or not but I found it when I was going thru some old journals and stuff..early spring cleaning I guess *shrugs*


If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (03-08-2003 09:38 PM).]

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-03-08 09:28 PM


Very beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Bill Charles
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2 posted 2003-03-08 09:28 PM


Ceinwyn - reads and sounds good to me...

BC

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3 posted 2003-03-08 09:45 PM


You may not know if it's good or not, but- trust me- it is... Very well put. I have the very same relationship with a friend of mine, and you put it into words better than I ever could.
Thank you

Connel
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4 posted 2003-03-08 09:46 PM


Very nice.. Thankya so much for sharing this beautiful peace.

Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart.

Sunshine
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5 posted 2003-03-08 09:59 PM


Ceinwyn...an early write?  What promise you showed even then...because you see, my friend, this is the heart of poetry...it is real, and honest...

thank you!

littlewing
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6 posted 2003-03-08 10:42 PM


C - this is amazing!  In my head you are this evening - excellent - pure heart xxoo  
passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-03-09 02:07 AM


yeah, I think it's really good!
Aenimal
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8 posted 2003-03-09 02:30 AM


Kris this is touching hope you find that person soon
rkcraig
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9 posted 2003-03-09 02:50 AM


beautiful poem and I love the message
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