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ShaolinsOnlyPoet
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since 2003-02-17
Posts 31
Brooklyn, New York

0 posted 2003-03-08 07:21 PM



The eyes of reality
peer
through your dreams.
Signs of insanity
invade you,
in your suburban streets.
You hide behind
your money tree,
but you can't hide
from me.
Your TV false humanity
will never fool me.
cause I know
what it is to be free.
And I am not free,
the nation isn't free.
Controlled by the government,
controlled by the TV
Are we mature enough to free?
Responsible enough?
Smart enough?
Maybe not,
but are you?
Are you responsible enough?
Mature enough,
smart enough
to think for us?
To decide how we live,
how we act
how we should feel,
and who we should blame.
I think each of us
should question this.
question you
the authority,
the holy, the old,
and the corrupt.

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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-03-08 07:23 PM


Very truthful words here. Very good write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2003-03-09 03:05 AM


yeah...~sigh~
regards2you
Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940
California
3 posted 2003-03-09 09:22 AM




Interesting.

Of course we should question, always and ever on it's own platform.

Just not on the backs of soldiers already carrying quite a load for our country.

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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