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the_loner_23
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0 posted 2003-03-08 06:52 PM


You lay your head
On my chest
And you listen
To my heart
As it plays its own music

You smile as
You hear my heart
Beating

My heart beats
Faster
As you start
To make love to me

After a few minutes
You lay your head
On my chest
Again
And my heart is playing
A different tune

A tune of my love
Growing
For you

Music of my Heart


Cold hands means a warm heart

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Margherita
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1 posted 2003-03-08 06:58 PM


Wonderful tunes of love!
Sweet and passionate all in one.
Love, Margherita

gemjop
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2 posted 2003-03-08 07:03 PM


Intimate moments, your memory will forever keep. thanks for sharing julie.
xxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

ThunderMage
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3 posted 2003-03-08 07:47 PM


I know the feelings you describe here Julie.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

Ringo
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4 posted 2003-03-08 09:23 PM


Very well done. Very descriptive.

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passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-03-09 02:57 AM


singing along...
rkcraig
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6 posted 2003-03-09 02:59 AM


another good write and very appropriately titled
Kristine
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7 posted 2003-03-09 08:10 AM


Oh, great piece!
Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2003-03-09 08:12 AM


the_loner_23
A lovely write and read.

inkedgoddess
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9 posted 2003-03-09 08:18 AM



warm and sweet and a peek in your heart, nice words of yours

sperarifraai
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10 posted 2003-03-09 09:40 AM


Beautiful writing

Sperari

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11 posted 2003-03-09 04:53 PM


....there's no better music in the world *sigh* :-)
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12 posted 2003-03-09 04:58 PM




(smiles) Oh Julie, this is beautiful, sweet friend, music does come from the heart and when there is love, there is a sound that no one could ever describe! (kiss on cheek) May this symphony always rock and roll in your heart, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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