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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-03-08 06:16 PM


Hawaiian Love


My lovely wahine
I shall never forget
your warm embrace,
your beautiful face
in the glow of this
Hawaiian sunset.

Hawaiian nights full of delight
where romantic love wants to grow.
Under the moonlite in the starlite
in view of volcanic flow.

My Hawaiian love, my precious flower,
you shall remain as mysterious to me
as this approaching midnight hour.


JamesLee
March08
2003

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-03-08 06:17 PM


So romantic James. Defiently gets my vote.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Margherita
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2 posted 2003-03-08 06:20 PM


James you make us dream with your hawaiian love.
Romantic...with mystery's touch.
Margherita

Sunshine
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3 posted 2003-03-08 06:24 PM



James...this is a lovely write!  Thank you!

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4 posted 2003-03-08 06:39 PM


enjoyed
Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2003-03-08 07:48 PM




(sigh) Oh James, this is lovely, sweet friend, this made me smile as so many of your gorgeous words do! (smiles) I wish for this romance to always fuel your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

littlewing
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6 posted 2003-03-08 08:07 PM


from one wahine to a bruddha - my vote is in xxoo

wahhhhhh - I miss Kauai  . . .

[This message has been edited by littlewing (03-10-2003 03:55 AM).]

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rkcraig
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8 posted 2003-03-09 03:03 AM


You make me so jealous that you live in Hawaii, it's not even 30 degrees here, love your work, but god I'm jealous
regards2you
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9 posted 2003-03-09 09:15 AM



James,

This is beautiful. Love the images and loving thoughts.


Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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10 posted 2003-03-09 09:18 AM


How lovely James...this is a gem!
~A hug and a vote~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

JamesMichael
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11 posted 2003-03-10 06:11 AM


Thank you the loner, Margherita, Sunshine, vandana, Noah, littlewing, passing shadow, rkcraig, regards2you and Enchantress for the lovely responses...James
Silver_Tryst
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12 posted 2003-03-10 10:30 PM


Well James,

Im Hawaiian, and i think the poem paint a beautiful Picture, Keep It Up

Silver_Tryst

JamesMichael
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13 posted 2003-03-11 06:18 AM


Thank you Silver_Tryst for the nice response...james
Larry C
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14 posted 2003-03-11 10:55 PM


JM,
A vote for the romantic! You.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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15 posted 2003-03-16 11:54 AM


James, this is really pretty.

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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16 posted 2003-03-18 11:42 AM


This is lovely, James... makes me want to visit Hawaii again. *S*
Earth Angel
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17 posted 2003-03-18 12:03 PM


Makes me want to head straight for the islands for some Honolulu lovin'!

Warm hugs,
Linda

WhiteRose
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18 posted 2003-03-18 06:35 PM


Definately one for the book. A lovely piece.
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19 posted 2003-03-23 11:46 AM


Under the moonlite in the starlite
in view of volcanic flow.
***
a hot love spot

JamesMichael
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20 posted 2003-03-23 04:49 PM


Thank you Larry, garysgirl, Suthern, Earth Angel, White Rose and Midnitesun for the nice responses...James
SPIRIT
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21 posted 2003-03-23 09:18 PM


This is such a soft, pretty write - I love it. Gets my vote.
Poet deVine
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22 posted 2003-03-28 09:44 PM


We should read this with 'Blue Hawaii' playing in the background. Lovely poem James!
Charisma
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23 posted 2003-03-29 03:16 PM


enjoyed this lovely piece very much

Charisma

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24 posted 2003-03-29 06:55 PM


never been to Hawaii but I can just imagine how beautiful it is to be there and in love...

~A~

LngJhnAg
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25 posted 2003-03-30 09:48 AM


I can hardly blame you for not including "wahine" as one of the words you rhymed, JM.  Seriously, though, the poem is beautiful for its sentiment.  Rack up another vote.
CSKpoet
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26 posted 2003-03-30 11:16 PM


smiles...a big vote from me...ahhhhh love in Hawaii...nothing like it

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

CSKpoet
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27 posted 2003-03-30 11:16 PM


smiles...a big vote from me...ahhhhh love in Hawaii...nothing like it

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

Charisma
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28 posted 2003-04-04 12:13 PM



dreambuilder
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29 posted 2003-04-04 12:35 PM


brought me back home
to the watching lava
& ocean in the night
& kens pancake house
or anna millers - lol
-ty 4 inspiring memories
& I voted

dreambuilder
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30 posted 2003-04-04 12:36 PM


brought me back home
to the watching lava
& ocean in the night
& kens pancake house
or anna millers - lol
-ty 4 inspiring memories
& I voted

dreambuilder
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caddyshack
31 posted 2003-04-04 12:37 PM


brought me back home
to the watching lava
& ocean in the night
& kens pancake house
or anna millers - lol
-ty 4 inspiring memories
& I voted

JP
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32 posted 2003-04-04 12:52 PM


Hey bra, ya got it goin' on. Da poem's it!  Shaka bra!



Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

Sunshine
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33 posted 2003-04-04 09:03 AM


        Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?...

OLIAS
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34 posted 2003-04-04 12:57 PM


Very much enjoyed thank you.

Regards,
Olias.

Midnitesun
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35 posted 2003-04-07 03:39 PM


Another bump for this one.
JamesMichael
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36 posted 2003-04-07 05:36 PM


Thank you Spirit, PoetdeVine, Charisma, Alice, LngJhn, Cheryl, dreambuilder, JP, Sunshine, Olias and Midnitesun for the beautiful responses...
dreambuilder I love to eat at the Anna Millers in Pearl City...one of my favorite waitresses works their...James

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