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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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0 posted 2003-03-08 05:16 PM



let us return,
to where
this love of ours,
can only
have been born,

not of this world,
you or me,

finding eachother
passing thru........

momentarily,

holding hands
in darkness,
erasing the test of distance,
as we bide time,

veil on our souls -
this burden of earth,

one day soon,
we will again,
be,

release your colors,
feel my love,

as you fall free,

unleash me tonight
from my chains of
this artificial prison,

as we pass through
we will soar above
this gate,
that has bound us,

come home for me,lover
let's lay down
embraced in sleeps promise,

then soon we will live
forever,

together,
wed,

by eternity




[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (03-09-2003 09:40 AM).]

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littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-03-08 05:22 PM


Good God this is haunting Michele but so utterly beautiful as well - your writing always takes me somewhere - this one sure did - a nice thought it is TY xxoo

as we pass through
and soar above
this gate,
we've been bound to,

lovely . . .

[This message has been edited by littlewing (03-08-2003 05:23 PM).]

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2 posted 2003-03-08 06:13 PM




(sigh) Oh Michele, this is such a heartfelt plea, sweet friend, I wish this to come true for you and for your heart to sing again with this grace! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michele, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2003-03-08 06:24 PM


Very very beautiful!
... but why would you want to SLEEP eternally? Better to be aware of this wonderful oneness!
Margherita

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
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4 posted 2003-03-08 06:43 PM


Agreed with Margherita I say sleep through this life live through that one
inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
5 posted 2003-03-08 10:52 PM


thank you , marg. and raff
yu are both so right, how in the world did i miss the boat on this one.
i think i was talking about the eternal sleep, but reemerging, well here it is again

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