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KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

0 posted 2003-03-08 04:14 PM

When I awake I smile slow
And slowly smile still
And sleakly slide my sleepy eyes
Out from their slippery shell
And dawn does dent my vision with
Different hues of dew
And lickety-split lips meet mine
A twisting tongue devine.
A sensual, soothing song we sing
To the skies so high we fly
In this magical morning
We're swiftly soaring
Through the rushing waterfall of love
That's roaring.

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2003-03-08 04:17 PM

(smiles) Yay!!! Oh Lauren, this is so beautiful, sweet friend, and may you always dive for pearls with your love in the falls of true love! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

2 posted 2003-03-08 04:21 PM

Thank you Noah!! You are so, so kind!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-03-08 06:03 PM

This is so romantic. I love it

Cold hands means a warm heart

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-03-08 06:07 PM

This kind of grows on you...James

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

5 posted 2003-03-08 09:05 PM

Thank you loner
James...ouch...I guess I need to start taking a closer look at my technique....

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Hevnlyfoxy
Junior Member

since 2003-03-16

Posts 10
NYC, NY

6 posted 2003-03-20 11:17 PM

So beautiful and romantic..I want to be inlove like this!!!

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

7 posted 2003-03-20 11:22 PM

Isn't love just wonderful

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

8 posted 2003-03-21 12:43 PM

Within your eyes,
peers the morning sun,
To learn it's glow.
I peer in, to learn of love....

Once again KOKO you have done the words justice. A beautiful piece!!!

Silver_Tryst
Member

since 2003-03-10

Posts 64
MT

9 posted 2003-03-21 12:44 PM

God this was good

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

10 posted 2003-03-21 01:19 AM

This is really pretty and
a very good book submission.

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

11 posted 2003-03-21 09:35 AM

Oooo-la-la-loverly!

Peace & Light,
EA

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

12 posted 2003-03-21 09:44 AM

Hevnly- Thank you. I'm sure you will be one day!
Whiterose- Yup! Thanks for the comment

Albert- Thank you! I always love your comments! ;D
Silver- Thank you!!
Ethel- Thank you very mucho! (=
Earth Angel- lol thank ya

Thank you everybody!!!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

13 posted 2003-03-21 10:04 AM

Lauren,

This is wonderful. Makes me envious.

"A sensual, soothing song we sing"

That melody comes through loud and clear.

Enjoyed greatly,

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

14 posted 2003-03-21 10:06 AM

Aaw, thanks Pat!!!! I really appreciate your compliments!!!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

15 posted 2003-03-21 10:41 AM

Very lovely dreamlike quality to this piece.
Much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

16 posted 2003-03-21 12:33 PM

Thanks Enchantress! It struck me as sort of dreamy, too

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

17 posted 2003-03-22 01:07 PM

Yes, KOKO!
Both dreamy and fun!
Lickety split...some yummy imagery.

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (03-22-2003 01:07 PM).]

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

18 posted 2003-03-22 05:58 PM

Thanks Midnitesun!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

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