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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Thoughts walking blindly, Maze of crossword puzzles, Never completed obstacles, Gravity of things falling, Spirit lost awaiting miracles, Mist of surviving, Too many hidden tears. Heavy burdens, Storming uncertainties, Thundering indigestion, Realities nightmare, Unanswered prayers, Swirling mist, Concealed fears. Self reflection, inner rejection, Endless meditation, listless sleep, Released medication, imprisoned mind, Therapeutic consultations, no consolation, Imposed rehabilitation, legislated changes, Medicinal operations, combating demons, Plastic reconstruction, added years. Gospel song of self survival, Heart beats of a clearing melody, Uplifting words of verse swinging, Weathered refrains of folklore ballads, Rocking penetrations in natural highs, Orchestrated blending, In the blues your soul hears! Thought: With all the clouds of living life fogging our mind, sometimes you have to create an inner clearing, for the music to meditate from. D.Lester Young 3/7/2003 Tuscaloosa, AL Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh David, I am actually quite fond of the fog and mist, sweet friend, for life should be full of mystery and to just reach in and all a sudden see something new is such a special blessing just as perhaps there may be tears behind it all but there is a spiritual uplifting behind just embracing it and eventually discovering it than just seeing it in an instant! (big hugggssssss) This is marvelous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet David, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I really enjoyed this read. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I'm sitting here trying to decide which part of this poem hits me the hardest -- but it looks like a photo finish! This one's definitely got my vote..... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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