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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-03-08 03:18 PM


Pressing Trouble

where is it
we go from here
maybe
I don’t deserve
this
and what right
do I have
but when
I press
your name
softly against
my lips
I have
trouble breathing


"Don't let the mistakes of your past be the journey of your future."


© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2003-03-08 03:46 PM



Sheesh...
dang...
don't forget to breathe,
y'hear?

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2003-03-08 03:49 PM


Oh wow Helen....I love this!!
*I know I say that about everything you write..but it's true!*
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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3 posted 2003-03-08 05:00 PM


Lady - mannn you always get me with so few words - this is lovely xxoo
Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2003-03-08 05:21 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Helen, I too know that feeling, it truly can be suffocating and I hope now you have that name on your lips that helps you breathe easily! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

gemjop
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5 posted 2003-03-08 07:34 PM


Helen helen helen. my oh my. keep em coming for i am reading. and loving them more each time.
love, gemmaxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-03-09 03:04 AM



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