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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-03-08 10:11 AM

It's in the Kiss

I woke up barely breathing
versing you in mind.
In after-hours dreaming,
the light peered through my blind.

The crescent moon was tilting
ever slight, it's phase.
Brought you to me, giving chance
to cure my dark malaise.

When silence reigns upon me,
I am lost in "Yesterday"
when whispered thoughts would mirror me,
with pictures of your stay.

I pause when you're not near me
suspended in those eyes,
memories to tide the lull,
halting morning's rise.

Most of all it's in the kiss,
from lips that tempt to please.
Induced to dream each night on end,
I fall to yours in ease.

Solitaire you've come to be,
a gem of valued grade.
But it's your kiss, that sparks the thrill
then soothes as soft as suede.

I wish sometimes that I could
reach into your mind,
your after-hours dreaming,
conveying my design.

I wish to be the content
of the pages in between,
non-fiction written in your heart
of being me, Maureen.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-03-08 10:19 AM

nakyd - love this:

I fall to yours in ease.

Ahhh yes - sometimes wish I had more constraint myself - is hard - excellent xxoo - but I agree the kiss - tells us all we need to know right from the very start xxoo

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2003-03-08 10:25 AM

Maureen,
One of your best, a keeper.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-03-08 10:38 AM

Yes, Maureen...definitely a

Hugs,
Ethel

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2003-03-08 10:40 AM

"non-fiction written in your heart
of being me, Maureen."

You charmed me with this one, my friend.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

5 posted 2003-03-08 12:18 PM

What a beautiful, soulful expression.
Eric

Connel

Senior Member

since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

6 posted 2003-03-08 12:19 PM

I loved the feeling put into this.

Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2003-03-08 12:42 PM

Just wishful thinking, while I am stuck home
awaiting car repairs.

littlewing, constraint..I wish I had less of it

Seymour, I am glad you think it's a keeper. But to tell you a secret..I keep all of my poems... thanks

hugss
M

Thank you Ethel.
hugss

Martie, I feel like my life is "so unreal" I just want to be able to feel again. Sometimes the rhyme brings out the truth and controls what the words will be.
Thank you for your kind words.

Eric and Connel, I only write the truth *s
Thank you both.
M

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2003-03-08 01:58 PM

Enjoyed your romantic writing...James

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