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Albert J. Allie
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since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

0 posted 2003-03-08 09:43 AM

He dwelt within the shadows
A lonely broken soul.
'Till once did love touch his heart
And ease the ruthless cold.

Long-Lasting life found in her eyes
What wasn't now has been.
Her name upon his lips as wine,
Her elegant Miss Vicky Lynn.

Her warmth surpass' the sun itself,
Her eyes the stars defeat.
Her voice it makes the Angels sing,
Her smile his heart does greet.

A flower nix, a rose is shocking,
in the presence of his affection.

A tender kiss which leaves pure bliss,
His life a resurrection.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-03-08 09:45 AM

Albert!!! Oh My - this reminds so of Shakespeare - his sonnets truly - I adore them and adore this - what a lucky woman - very nice xxoo

Albert J. Allie
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since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

2 posted 2003-03-08 09:50 AM

Thank you littlewing.
She's not so lucky anymore

What a great compliment to be compared to one of my favorite writers! I blush!

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2003-03-08 11:54 AM

classically romantic, aaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh, nice job

Albert J. Allie
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since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

4 posted 2003-03-08 11:56 AM

Thank you Goddess. I blush again!!

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

5 posted 2003-03-08 12:17 PM

Very pretty.
Eric

Connel

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since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

6 posted 2003-03-08 12:18 PM

Albert,

Keep up the good work!

Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart.

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

7 posted 2003-03-08 12:34 PM

Thanks Eric and Connel!!

I am glad you liked it

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2003-03-08 12:45 PM

Albert, this is so romantic, and of course, I like it.....

Hugs,
Ethel

KoKo
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since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

9 posted 2003-03-08 12:57 PM

Albert,
I don't think I need to say it for you to know it, but I love this, as I always love your work! Your words are beautiful and they always seem to lift my spirits. I can't wait to read more...As always!

Hugs,
KoKo

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

10 posted 2003-03-08 04:00 PM

THANK YOU KOKO! I love that you love my writing! It's inspiring also that it makes you smile!

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

11 posted 2003-03-08 04:01 PM

garysgrl garysgrl!! WOOHOOO!! Thank you so much!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

12 posted 2003-03-08 04:05 PM

(smiles) Yay!!! Oh Albert, I've missed you the last few days, sweet friend, this is a gorgeous love poem and rejuvenation sentiment, I hope this love always fills your heart, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, swet Albert, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

13 posted 2003-03-08 04:11 PM

Oh so romantic...the ladies of Passions shall swoon!
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

14 posted 2003-03-08 07:33 PM

Very enjoyable!
Margherita

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

15 posted 2003-03-08 08:55 PM

THANK YOU NOAH!

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

16 posted 2003-03-08 08:55 PM

Thank you margherita!!!!!

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

17 posted 2003-03-08 08:56 PM

Enchantress! Thank you! That is a wonderful compliment!

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

18 posted 2003-03-08 09:34 PM

Albert - I like your Vicky Lynn, nice write...

BC

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

19 posted 2003-03-09 02:57 AM

sigh

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

20 posted 2003-03-09 02:59 AM

Albert~
I have to admit that I clicked on this one because
Vicky Lynn is MY name...LOL. Same spelling and everything.
However...I'm replying because the poem is beautiful,
and I enjoyed the read.
Nicely done.
~Vicky Lynn

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes
[This message has been edited by vlraynes (03-09-2003 03:00 AM).]

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

21 posted 2003-03-10 01:13 AM

Thank you passing shadows!!

Vlraynes....What a coincidence THAT is huh? I always loved that name...
Thank you for tellimg me

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

22 posted 2003-03-12 07:53 PM

Vicky Lynn is such a pretty name. Is this about your girlfriend or wife? It's very nicely done!

Elizabeth

It's not having what you want, it's wanting what you've got...
--Sheryl Crow

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

23 posted 2003-03-12 08:50 PM

Hi sky....
About an ex....
I'm Glad you liked it...

~AL

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