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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-03-08 07:51 AM

sunlight peeking
thru ivory lace,

windows singing
familiar songs,

morning comes early today,

spring tiptoes by,
waiting at the threshold,

enterring shortly,
to its own rhythm of time,

winter starts melting,
sparrows splash
in rainbow puddles,

seasons shaking hands

peace and love
love and peace

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (03-08-2003 11:36 PM).]

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

1 posted 2003-03-08 09:30 AM

Oh my Goddess!!! This was beautiful. Made me feel warm! LOVE your work.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-03-08 09:40 AM

Michele - I love this - not only because you write so beautifully but because I long for that Spring day and this long winter to leave me - TY needed that bit of season this morning xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (03-08-2003 04:27 PM).]

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2003-03-08 11:40 AM

thanks for the nice comments, both of you, feeling springy today in NJ

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

4 posted 2003-03-08 12:30 PM

Isnt spring wonderful. The renewal of life, of winter's hibernation slowly coming to an end. Glad to have read this short but cute poem!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2003-03-08 12:35 PM

spring tiptoes,
at the threshold,

Loved this Michele~
I'm of like mind this morning,
going to plant some flowers today
and try to doll the place up a bit.

Connel

Senior Member

since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

6 posted 2003-03-08 12:37 PM

Oh how I love spring. I think everyone loves spring, all the beautiful plants.. I just love it! Thankyou for posting this.

Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-03-08 01:09 PM

Michele, I love spring, too. Just wish the fog and rain would go away for awhile here in sunny Florida.....

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

8 posted 2003-03-08 07:46 PM

thanks for making me smile michelle.
xxxxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

TaureauRouge
Junior Member

since 2002-06-01

Posts 26
A mass of land between two oceans

9 posted 2003-03-08 07:55 PM

Where I am right now, Northern Virginia, Spring does seem to be taking its time in arriving amidst the six foot snow embankments. I think you captured the very subtle touchs of a seasonal shift nicely. Good job

"I should have been a pair of ragged claws/ Scuttling over the floors of silent seas"-T.S. Eliot

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2003-03-09 03:03 AM

yes! beautiful imagery!

rkcraig
Member

since 2003-02-27

Posts 202
Cincinnati, Ohio, USA

11 posted 2003-03-09 03:04 AM

I enjoy reading your work soo much and I will continue to do so because they are absolutely amazing

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

12 posted 2003-03-09 03:20 AM

hard to feel springy, just got hit by snow which turned to ice when the temp hit way beloe zero...but i love your words

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

13 posted 2003-03-09 09:13 AM

Michele,

This is beautiful. Light and airy and 'springy'....can feel it in this poem.

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

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