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Open Poetry #25
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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace
0 posted 2003-03-08 07:20 AM


Unrest

I sleep
the best
I can
but
there is
no rest
in sheets
wrinkled with
your pain

"Don't let the mistakes of your past be the journey of your future."
© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Albert J. Allie
Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512
Queens NY
1 posted 2003-03-08 09:31 AM

This to me was very powerful in so few words! I agree with this very much! Nice work!
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
2 posted 2003-03-08 09:39 AM

Goodness Lady - reading my mind - you must see my "Insomnia" lol - this is just lovely - your writing always is xxoo
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