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0 posted 2003-03-08 05:34 AM


~*~ ~*~
In the cold, cold night
I feel you very near
With your arms around me
showing love so clear

The warmth from your body
lying next to mine
You are holding me real close
it certainly does feel fine

Your arms are strong yet gentle
as you are holding me
Making me feel safe
where no harm will ever be

Your touch is oh, so tender
as you caress me, dear
With your fingertips
lightly touching everywhere

We are whispering our love
without uttering a word
With touches speaking loudly
and very plainly heard
~*~ ~*~


12/15/02





[This message has been edited by garysgirl (03-08-2003 07:23 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-03-08 05:38 AM


This one is talking to me...tenderly...James
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2 posted 2003-03-08 05:45 AM


Thank you, James, for your nice reply...

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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3 posted 2003-03-08 06:10 AM


Ethel Mae your thoughts are ALWAYS so beautiful and serene. I am so missing these moments you speak of and know them well...sigh. you always manage to make me miss him even more. ha ha, i don't mind.
lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

Albert J. Allie
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4 posted 2003-03-08 09:33 AM


Now THIS is MY kind of poetry!
We are whispering our love
without uttering a word
With touches speaking loudly
and very plainly heard

Wonderful as usual! Soooo sweet!


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5 posted 2003-03-08 10:14 AM


Gemma, thank you so much. You always know exactly what i'm trying to say, don't you?

Hugs,
Ethel Mae

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6 posted 2003-03-08 10:18 AM


Thank you, Albert. That is a really nice thing to say. I appreciate it....

Hugs,
Ethel


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7 posted 2003-03-08 12:19 PM


So beautiful...!
Eric

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8 posted 2003-03-08 12:45 PM


This one is very nice.. And oh so tender.

Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart.

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9 posted 2003-03-08 12:58 PM


Thank you, Eric. I appreciate your reply...

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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10 posted 2003-03-08 01:00 PM


Connell, I'm glad that you liked it  

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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11 posted 2003-03-08 01:00 PM


We are whispering our love
without uttering a word

Wow, I love this! So much passion and happiness in this. Great write!!!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
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12 posted 2003-03-08 01:26 PM


Thank you, Koko, for your nice comments...

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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13 posted 2003-03-08 04:12 PM




(smiles) Oh Ethel, this is beautiful, sweet friend, this made me smile as so many of your gorgeous words do! (kiss on cheek) Sometimes all you need is body language to tell someone you love someone, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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14 posted 2003-03-08 06:50 PM


liked it a lot
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15 posted 2003-03-08 06:55 PM


Feels really cozy ..... lingering tenderness.
Beautiful.
Margherita

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16 posted 2003-03-09 11:53 PM


Noah, thank you, friend  

Vandana, I'm glad that you liked it....


Margherita, thank you for such a sweet reply...


Hugs,
Ethel

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