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Lucie
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0 posted 2003-03-08 03:54 AM


Steamy summer nights
spent outside my bedroom window
on the slant of the front porch roof.

Thrilled with my 13 year old rebellion.
Just a touch of fear at the thought
of my mothers face if she caught me here.

Watching the clouds in the night sky
as they slid silently, distorting the face
of the man in the moon.

The feel of the shingles against my bare toes.
The sound of a car on a distant street.
The smell of dew covered grass in the air.

A smile, at the ability to close my eyes
and bring this memory...

         right here...
             right now...
      Just 20 short years later...

Remember me with a smile on your face, or please don't remember me at all.


© Copyright 2003 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-03-08 03:58 AM


time does pass so fast...good write
garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-03-08 04:00 AM


Good memories are something else,
aren't they? Always to be cherished...

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

littlewing
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3 posted 2003-03-08 04:00 AM


Lucie - you brought me right back - I think you wrote this about me hehehe - loved it! xxoo
sea_of_okc
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4 posted 2003-03-08 04:09 AM


This is too cool. I have the exact same memories except it was the roof in the back of my house and just a few more years ago, but hey who's counting? Wonderful read, thank you
Sunshine
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5 posted 2003-03-08 08:27 AM



...20 short years later...
30
40...

yep...

Enjoyed!

BloomingRose
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6 posted 2003-03-08 09:08 AM


Nice memories. Enjoyed!

Deb

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2003-03-08 01:53 PM


Very nice...James
vandana
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8 posted 2003-03-08 06:53 PM


enjoyed
gemjop
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9 posted 2003-03-08 06:55 PM


Lucie, thanks for sharing the moment. very much enjoyed this.
lots of love, gemmaxxxxxxxx

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