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garysgirl
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0 posted 2003-03-08 03:32 AM


~~~~~
You are there
here with me
Hearts so close
forever to be

Thoughts are here
there with you
In my minds eye
a clear view

Apart by distance
together in love
Sent to each other
by wings from above

Though you are there
far away
You are here with me
always to stay

I hear your voice
here from afar
With love from there
where you are

From the wind
whispering clear
Bringing you from there
with me near

Stars in sky
up above me
Are where you are
for you to see

So my dear Love
just look around
For me with you
will be found

Though away from me
Far apart
Together are we
close in heart

To look around
if we will do
You will see me
I will see you

As you are there
here with me
With love as ours
this will always be
~~~~~


12/06/02


[This message has been edited by garysgirl (03-08-2003 05:39 AM).]

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2 posted 2003-03-08 03:35 AM


Dixe, thank you for the smile..
Heart Hugs,
Ethel

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3 posted 2003-03-08 04:18 AM


Enjoyed your heart-song!
Love, Margherita

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Thank you, Margherita...

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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5 posted 2003-03-08 04:44 AM


Nice rhythm and simple style
Made this ole goat smile  

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6 posted 2003-03-08 05:01 AM


sea_of_okc, I'm glad it made you smile...

Hugs,
Ethel

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7 posted 2003-03-08 05:22 AM


so romantic.. I loved this

"Stars in sky
up above me
Are where you are
for you to see"

beautiful! Thanks for sharing


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8 posted 2003-03-08 05:37 AM


Thank you, sweetwater, for your sweet reply...

Hugs,
Ethel

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9 posted 2003-03-08 08:57 AM


When there's love in the heart, it truly won't depart.
Nice write.

Deb

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10 posted 2003-03-08 09:35 AM


this is so touching
and it flows so sweetly.

I know he must love it!
Great job.
Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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11 posted 2003-03-08 10:03 AM


Deb, thank you very much.....

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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12 posted 2003-03-08 10:05 AM


Alyssa. he does. Thank you for your reply.

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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13 posted 2003-03-08 04:39 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Ethel, this is beautiful, sweet friend, this made me cry as I have no love now but only imagining maybe there is someone out there for me who is truly thinking of me! (wipes tears) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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14 posted 2003-03-08 04:44 PM



Did you know there was a challenge
by this very line?

You must have...

and if you didn't, just know,
I had to smile broadly when I saw the title...

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