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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-03-07 11:58 PM

Wind whistle
through window
a baby's cry
a dog's whine
a tire screech
Blue sky
falls to ground
angels caught
in powerlines
on a winter's day

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2003-03-08 12:00 PM

WOW.....

LAuren~

Take me where the tides start
So I can pull you into me

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-03-08 12:11 PM

Raph - angels caught in powerlines - this is intense this one here - as in coming to save the ruins of the wreckage? Little stab at our society too - hence the powerlines in the way? You always get me thinking - I love that - even though I am probably way off here - excellent writing as always - amazing - just contemplating here . . . xxoo

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2003-03-08 12:54 PM

thanks as alway Lauren

Sue a little off but as i've said before like people having different interpretations

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2003-03-08 12:55 PM

Oh my. Lots of electic energy in this one Raph.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-03-08 12:56 PM

can you elaborate for me please - im confused over here and no - Im not blonde

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

6 posted 2003-03-08 01:00 AM

Kacy your replies always make me smile

Sue its not as involved as all that, just a simple piss/moan about life..no shot at society(it shoots itself)..but i like your thoughts

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

7 posted 2003-03-08 01:16 AM

TY - see I go too deep sometimes - need that elaboration (society lol)

sweetwater
Member

since 2002-12-16

Posts 178
Perth

8 posted 2003-03-08 01:23 AM

yeah... wow! Great images it created. I especially like

"Blue sky
falls to ground
angels caught
in powerlines
on a winter's day"

Thanks for sharing.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2003-03-08 02:04 AM

damn...

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

10 posted 2003-03-08 06:57 AM

close the curtains. you've scared me. well done. this had a wonderful, yet scary feeling of complete aloneness.dont kno how you do it, but you do.

a haunting echo.

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