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Cracking Knuckles
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Cracking Knuckles |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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The crack of my hands is deafening in this still night A deep ache in the small of my back tells me I should be lying still Eyes burning red Am I awake or is this a dream? Numbness tingling up my arm I need another cigarette and something to quench this addiction |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Damn, I know this place. Where one shuffles a deck a knuckles. Very nice write, Littlewing. Ed |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
i read this and laid back marveling how often you read my mind |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ed - hehehe - a deck a knuckles - good one - Raph - scares me to know I can read your mind hehehe TY Guys means a lot coming from the both of you xxoo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This does not sound like a very peaceful night! Before you go to bed at night, why not have a nice warm bath with some lavender essential oil added to it, then drink some warm milk sweetened with vanilla and honey, do some deep breathing exercises, meditate on a beautiful place where you would love to be and then picture yourself there, listen to the waves of a sound machine-- and drift off to la-la land! If those suggestions don't work, knock back a pint of beer, a magnum of champagne and a mickey of gin then take 2 aspirins and call me in the morning! P.S. I think knuckle cracking is only for the brave of heart--not for the feint of heart like myself! tehe Interesting piece of writing! Sweet dreams!... EA |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
A deep ache in the small of my back tells me I should be lying still Eyes burning red Oh the toss and turn of racing thoughts! It's time to sleep~ Laughing at EA while turning the lights out. Dream a little dream littlewing~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome writing! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Earth - sounds so verrrry nice - too bad I only have liquor here hmmm - no but TY - I think I will pass out on this keyboard Blues - will do Passing - always so good to hear from you TY xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (03-08-2003 02:18 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Sue, this is powerfully haunting, sweet friend, I know this haunting feeling and I hope this all blows by now with comfort and rest! (big hugggsssss) This is poignant, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
TY Noah - is always nice to hear your kind words xxoo |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very good write, littlewing... your pen name reminds me of the small mayflies that will soon come to dip into our summer tea... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
TY Sun - actually is after a tune by Hendrix "Littlewing" - must listen . . . |
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