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Will You?
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Will You? |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
Against your chest I lay my ear Your heartbeat I hear As you hold me near I haven't a fear It's all clear I love you my dear. Into my arms veer I'll switch my gears So you won't leave me in tears My heart may not be on my sleeve but I'm still transparent, sheer I need you here Will you stay? |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Let her read this poem and she will stay forever... Warm hugs, EA |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Jacqueline, this is a very heartfelt plea, sweet friend, I wish for this to come true for you as you are so deserving of this comfort and joy! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much, I send angel hugs of friendship your way! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jacqueline, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah..very very nicely said...much enjoyed. ~hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
kinda sad but beautiful too |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
The simple places in life are the best aren't they??? Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
I thoroughly enjoyed this one... especially the change in pace with the last line not rhyming. That took talent. Imagine all the People living life in peace... |
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