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Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2003-03-07 06:51 PM


“TOUCH OF YOU”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
If your silhouette were
outlined by shadows caress,
and your whispers came
of loving breath, I would
enter into darkness depths,
to know the touch of you...
~~~~

© Copyright 2003 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2003-03-07 06:54 PM


Captured well in a breathless inhale.
Well done. TD

inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2003-03-07 06:58 PM


aaaaahhh.......just lovely
Earth Angel
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3 posted 2003-03-07 07:01 PM


I'd light a candle to cast the shadows away...

~ Go softly into our good night...
EA

Martie
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4 posted 2003-03-07 07:08 PM


Bill...the way you talk of love, I don't think it would be dark for long.
Enchantress
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5 posted 2003-03-07 07:17 PM


Gosh Bill...you do have a way of making a woman melt ya know?!
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2003-03-07 07:38 PM


Bill,
Well done and believable.

regards2you
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7 posted 2003-03-07 07:40 PM




Bill,

Just plain pretty!

Enjoyed, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Joyce Johnson
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8 posted 2003-03-07 07:42 PM


So much in so few words.  Joyce
Margherita
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9 posted 2003-03-07 07:44 PM


Love is the light guiding you ...
Rather than tender, I think it is passionate.
Margherita

passing shadows
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10 posted 2003-03-08 03:25 AM


sigh
garysgirl
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11 posted 2003-03-08 03:44 AM


Oh Bill, how loving and romantic.....

Hugs,
Ethel

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12 posted 2003-03-08 04:36 PM




(sigh) Oh Bill, this is beautiful, sweet friend, you always touch the heart with your words of romance and will truly touch that special someone forever! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

littlewing
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13 posted 2003-03-08 05:13 PM


Bill - this is absolutely breathtaking - very nice writing xxoo
vandana
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14 posted 2003-03-08 06:49 PM


liked this
gemjop
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15 posted 2003-03-08 06:53 PM


Bill, you smoothie, smoochy, loving chap, loving your stuff as always.
lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

Elizabeth Santos
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16 posted 2003-03-08 07:17 PM


Perfectly romantic and
Romantically perfect

Here's a kiss to the romantic poet of passions
XXX
Liz

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17 posted 2003-03-08 07:19 PM


You have pleased the Witch of The Cypress--

my my Bill, truly lovely sigh of a write...

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