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0 posted 2003-03-07 06:41 PM



pray for peace my friends
use words instead of weapons
raise your swords of voice
communicate with heaven
our plea for world harmony~

Chris Barker
2003
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© Copyright 2003 Chris Barker - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-03-07 06:42 PM


Nightshade - it's a shame that we can't live in peace...

BC

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2 posted 2003-03-07 06:48 PM


Nicely said Chris...
Love and miss ya!
~Hugs, Teed~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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3 posted 2003-03-07 06:51 PM


Chris....peaceful friend, why cant the world think like you? loved these thoughts.
lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

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4 posted 2003-03-07 06:53 PM



Tanka.
Bless you.

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5 posted 2003-03-07 06:57 PM


My voice joins yours in this plea for peace.
---a little tanka conveying a big message!

Peace, Love & Light,
Linda

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6 posted 2003-03-07 07:11 PM


Bill - yes it is. Thankyou

Nancylee - love & miss you too! Thanks

gemma - thankyou for reading & commenting.

Karilea - thanks sweet lady.

Linda - lovely comments - thankyou!

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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7 posted 2003-03-07 07:17 PM


I'm with you 100% on this theme, Chris. Peace, namaste, heart hugs to all your family and friends.
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8 posted 2003-03-07 07:31 PM


Midnitesun - thankyou so much. Hugs to you and yours as well.

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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9 posted 2003-03-07 08:00 PM


Peace is priority topic ... thank you for your wise and beautiful words.
Margherita

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10 posted 2003-03-07 08:31 PM


Margherita - thankyou for reading and commenting.

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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11 posted 2003-03-07 10:13 PM




(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this deeply touched my heart as so many of your words do! Unfortunately it seems we may have to use our words as weapons in order to spark attention in creating love and peace so we must rise to the moment as the First Amendment is ours and we must rebel with poetry! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, here's hoping those pushing for war will lose and the peacemakers will triumph, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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12 posted 2003-03-07 10:19 PM


Chris~


every day....every day....thank you for this....harmony....hugssss
Lauren~

Take me where the tides start
So I can pull you into me

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13 posted 2003-03-07 10:41 PM


It seems,  that for as long as I can remember I have lived in an era where nuclear power was... not the norm, but all
too common threat....and it's getting closer?

It's a fright for peace.

Hugs for you Chris~

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14 posted 2003-03-07 10:59 PM


Noah, thanks sweetie. Yes, lets use our words of prayer now more than ever. hugs,

Lauren - thankyou dear poetess.

Blues - I am glad you enjoyed. thankyou.

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15 posted 2003-03-08 03:02 AM


yes...
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16 posted 2003-03-08 10:11 AM


Nightshade - I was born in the 70's so your plea for peace strikes me so (wishing I were a Woodstock baby) - very nice plea - one we should all keep in mind TY xxoo
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17 posted 2003-03-08 10:25 AM


Chris...I hope that one day peace will not just live in my heart...but throughout the world.  
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18 posted 2003-03-08 10:26 AM


Chris, this is so true. I wish so much that we could have peace in all nations.


Is the "tanka" 5-7-5-7-7 syllables? Are there any other rules for it, like the others? I don;t think I've tried one of these yet. I love doing these little verses, don't you?


Hugs,
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (03-08-2003 08:12 PM).]

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19 posted 2003-03-08 10:54 AM


may it be so, may it be His will

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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20 posted 2003-03-08 11:03 AM


Thankyou all so much. Peace be with you!!

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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