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gemjop
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0 posted 2003-03-07 03:17 PM



I am room swapping
from seat to sleep
killing the hours with slumber

choking me under
fairytale kingdom of love
slaying reality

one of many fatality
to be buried alive without you
living the nightmare

feeling the tear
of siamese twin parted soul
give yourself back.

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2003-03-07 03:39 PM


Interesting visuals and choices of words.

Warm hugs,
Earth Angel

garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-03-07 03:48 PM


Gemma, this is interesting. You do have a
way with words, Lady...

Hugs,
Ethel  

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2003-03-08 03:51 AM


wow
gemjop
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4 posted 2003-03-08 07:21 AM


Thank q for your replies xxxxxxxxxxx
Ericc
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5 posted 2003-03-08 10:37 AM


Beautiful...wonderful imagery.
Eric

Sunshine
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6 posted 2003-03-08 10:39 AM



What an interesting write...
sure would like to know
the feelings/thoughts
behind it...

thank you Gemma...

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