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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2003-03-07 02:19 PM


Your recent requests to

'Forget me'

followed by

'Forget-me-not'

puts my soul into
a perennial bouquet of

Forget-me-knots!

so I am choosing to

forget you.


Don't send me any more flowers.

© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-03-07 02:22 PM


ouch... well delivered sting...


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2 posted 2003-03-07 02:26 PM




(sigh) I "forget-me-thought" it over, so I shall just move on too and take your word! (big hugggssssss) This is so clever, sweet friend, I love your puns, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2003-03-07 02:29 PM


at least you get flowers
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4 posted 2003-03-07 02:29 PM


Ha ha ha! Damn, I love this!
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5 posted 2003-03-07 02:30 PM



Smart gal!
Clever, too!

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6 posted 2003-03-07 02:30 PM


I like this !
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7 posted 2003-03-07 02:38 PM


LOL, are you guys who love it just tired of sending flowers? LOL, thanks for reading this FTD rejection slip.
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8 posted 2003-03-07 02:43 PM


I love this in-your-face write!--and very cleverly written, I might add!

Warm friendly hugs,
EA


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9 posted 2003-03-07 02:45 PM


that's pretty clever, love it
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10 posted 2003-03-07 02:47 PM


LOL, the scent of a flowers-in-your-face bouquet just gives the sender the last word.
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11 posted 2003-03-07 02:58 PM


OH WOW!!  This is one cool write!!
Wish I could vote!!
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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12 posted 2003-03-07 03:00 PM


or was that a snapdragon?
yikes!

nice play, this


w.g.

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13 posted 2003-03-07 03:05 PM


Nancy, thanks for that reply! But I think already have too many submitted.

WG! LOL, I absolutely love snapdragons!

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14 posted 2003-03-07 04:41 PM


Kacy, you wrote this so well, that I'll bet you could really put someone in their place, with a sweet smile on your face....and get the last word, too. You're good, lady....
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15 posted 2003-03-07 06:49 PM


it must be the scorpio personality coming out of me

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16 posted 2003-03-08 03:34 AM


tell it like it is!
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17 posted 2003-03-08 04:31 PM


Midnite - this is awesome!  I just love your writing - this one is a slap in the face - know how that feels- just threw some out myself - couldnt bare to look at them - TY xxoo
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