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wandering glider
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0 posted 2003-03-07 02:14 PM



Seventeen in three
with attention span that's short
haiku - senryu




w.g.


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Brad Majors
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1 posted 2003-03-07 02:16 PM


inforamtional as well as well done!
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2 posted 2003-03-07 02:24 PM



Exactly!

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3 posted 2003-03-07 02:28 PM




(smiles) Presto!!! (big hugggsssss) I just love this, sweet friend, this is exactly the form of this style of poetry, you've well mastered it as well as explained it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2003-03-07 02:29 PM


By gosh, I think you've got it!

Warm hugs,
Earth Angel

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5 posted 2003-03-07 02:40 PM


LOL, enjoyed this.
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6 posted 2003-03-07 03:04 PM


PERFECT!!

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

littlewing
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7 posted 2003-03-08 10:13 AM


glider - was always just awful at this - still am - you paint a lovely px here xxoo
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