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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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Mask (3/7/03 JDC) He stands alone in the crowd Hoping no one notices He captivates me He laughs so joylessly Watching for laughter returned He mesmerizes me He watches for the next blow Wanting no one to see He hypnotizes me He is beautiful and has no clue Wounded, he tries to hide And doesn’t realize all that he is When he finds the peace He doesn’t know he is looking for I will be here, as I was before |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
The last stanza really stood out to me. I know this situation so very well right now and will have to show it to someone else. Enjoyed this very much. Well done. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you. Susan |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
beautiful, romatic reassurance. enjoyed! Rf |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
This is just amazing susan! Its not fair to get my brain working when i was sleeping |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes...like this one...and know how blind I myself am at times...so can relate to this on both sides..... enjoyed |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you Dan!! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you Ron! |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
your welcome I say it as I sees it |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I could have written this, but never as well! |
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