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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-03-07 01:14 PM



Missing

you grant
me wings
so I
can fly
then…

you take
my heart

I find
no air
when
the sky
is missing


"Don't let the mistakes of your past be the journey of your future."


© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-03-07 01:54 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Helen, I too know that feeling where not only is there gravity, but the sky seems so low and drapled over you like wax paper! (sigh) Here's wishing for you to always fly free, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Brad Majors
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Georgia
2 posted 2003-03-07 02:33 PM


nicely done
Thomas119gold
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3 posted 2003-03-07 02:43 PM




rkcraig
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4 posted 2003-03-07 02:44 PM


I love your work, this is awesome.  It says so much in a little space.
Ericc
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5 posted 2003-03-07 04:49 PM


Oh wow....this is breath taking.
Eric

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2003-03-08 03:46 AM



Cpat Hair
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7 posted 2003-03-13 02:30 PM


this is indeed well done...tight..imaginative and meaningful..


machiner
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8 posted 2003-03-13 02:38 PM


Yeah...

I am sorry for your loss.

machiner

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