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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2003-03-07 09:50 AM


Midnight Mistress

I dreamt of wine, and song and touch
of missing you in foolish mind.
I catered to, and fed my whims,
smoked the after-notion's find.

And when I had enough to please,
sated with content of you,
I closed these eyes, replaying then
the longing for, tomorrow's view.

I'm lost inside my deepest fears,
a midnight mistress, tracking find.
I dreamt of wine, and song and touch
of missing you in foolish mind.


And when the morning reaches in
and pulls me from my dormant sleep,
distance me from mirror's hold.
Let Alice feel, my warmth in keep.

M
* for Alicethruglass

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2003 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2003-03-07 09:52 AM


(smiling)... you dear one...sometimes amaze me...

enjoyed

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2003-03-07 09:55 AM


Today I am relaxed...yesterday I was a mess..who knows what the 'morrow brings...
and who cares as long as it is not more snow!


Thank you C. I decided to behave myself and write "soft" this morning.
hugss
M

Elizabeth Santos
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3 posted 2003-03-07 10:02 AM


Wonderful!
I am in awe of your talents
Liz

Ericc
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4 posted 2003-03-07 04:54 PM


So lyrical and full of beauty.
Great writing!
Eric

rkcraig
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since 2003-02-27
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5 posted 2003-03-07 04:56 PM


I love your work, every piece that you write is so incredible.  I will continue looking forward to your wisdom.
Earth Angel
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6 posted 2003-03-07 05:06 PM


Very graceful writing...

~ May your morrows bring no sorrows,
EA

Bill Charles
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7 posted 2003-03-07 06:23 PM


nakdthoughts - liked this, thought a lot about what you have written, yes, I liked it... Perhaps at midnight...

BC

passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2003-03-08 03:40 AM


sigh
nakdthoughts
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9 posted 2003-03-14 11:14 AM


Liz, I am always appreciative when I  see you have left your thoughts for me.
*s Thank you
M

Eric, I am glad you enjoyed my words.


rkcraig, and I love your responses
Thank you

Thank you, Earth Angel for your kind words.

BC
"Perhaps at midnight" those if onlys keep collecting and piling up

BC

Thank you Dixie for your sigh...

hugs
M
  

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