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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Naked Clustered black pillars Limbs naked with silent bark, Lush green rustles wait |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wonderful Haiku Elizabeth !! Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes..expectant... nice stuff... now you have me thinking of early spring green..tinging limbs.. enjoyed |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
THank you, Chris Haiku is not my forte Appreciate your respponse Liz |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
ah, yes, and just around the corner, lovely spring abides! Or do we and the trees abide as spring crouches down to spring upon us? Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
CPat - run with it Create one of your materpieces I'll be looking for it Thanks Liz VAS, I am awaiting the lush green THank you Liz |
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Amature2 Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 416 |
Elizabeth, this is a nice Haiku. I know in Pennsylvania Spring is still a bit away. But soon, Your once black pillars With bare naked silent bark Will speak loud with Green |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
the other day when there was a touch of warm..I thought to myself...it won't be long and the trees will grant us some color soon. *s nice Liz M |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
What a lovely hiaku |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
Beautiful. I have recently forced myself to start reading Haiku, and now cannot figure out why I avoided them before. I'm hooked and you just snared me permanently. BTW 70 degrees yesterday and today here in the wonderful Sacramento suburbs. Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
This is so hopeful. The renewal of spring. I think you write these well. Enjoyed, hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! But not for long, because Mother Nature has all her models ready for the next spring fashion line-up! LOL! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A wonderful Haiku Elizabeth! Much enjoyed...be well. ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Liz, I love these. Aren't they fun to write?  |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Yup, works for me! INclan |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice |
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sea_of_okc Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568Oklahoma City, OK, USA |
Wish them green rustles would hurry up! Very enjoyable |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
...the "lush green rustles" are definitely well worth the "wait"! Warm morning hugs! Linda |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Sounds like spring is around the corner! Enjoyed. Deb |
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