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0 posted 2003-02-15 03:12 PM


~* If All My Wishes Could Come True *~

If all my wishes could come true
when I wished for anything,
I’d wish to see each human smile
and light to this darkness bring.

I’d wish to heal all hearts in pain,
and hold every, single lonely hand.
I’d wish for total harmony,
and peace throughout this land.

I’d wish everyone knew his name,
and never, ever would forget.
They’d think of him in reverence
when they see the day's sun set.

Each person filled with hate
I’d wish them one perfect dream.
To those so hard on themselves,
I’d wish some solid self-esteem.

I'd wish that every wish tonight
made upon a shooting star
would come true for everyone,
being part of their memoir.

I'd wish that all lonely people
walking along the streets today,
Find someone to share their life with,
loving them until their dying day.

I’d wish there always be rainbows
and brilliant stars up in our sky,
I’d wish everyone we love were safe,
but should they leave we can say goodbye.

And, finally, I'd wish that all the hate
be extinguished by his love.
I wish that evil finally surrenders
And bows to the almighty above.

I’d wish these things sincerely,
but our lives can only be
determined by those wishes
that we make become our reality.




          
~* Carpe' Diem *~  



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1 posted 2003-02-15 03:16 PM


Oh so beautiful and very very true Sharon!
Much enjoyed the thoughts herein..
There is much here for many to ponder...
You have such a loving heart.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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2 posted 2003-02-15 03:17 PM


Mysteria - I wish all of them would come true...

BC

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3 posted 2003-02-15 03:54 PM


Oh, Mysteria, these wishes are so needed right now, in these times of trouble. I have wished the same things, many times, but my main wish is for them all to become reality, as you said.  What a wonderful and insightful poem this is...a true gem.

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen!  ~~S~~

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4 posted 2003-02-15 04:36 PM


These are wonderful wishes, Sharon. And, I would wish these, too.

[This message has been edited by SmartChick (02-15-2003 09:43 PM).]

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5 posted 2003-02-15 04:53 PM


Sharon,
I noticed all the wishes were for others.
Not even one litle one for youself. So I'll wish a wish for you.

[This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (02-15-2003 10:45 PM).]

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6 posted 2003-02-15 05:00 PM


beautifully written mysteria.  I pray these wishes come true for all.
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7 posted 2003-02-15 05:21 PM


wonderful wishes and I also wish for these wishes to become reality.

aloha and hugs, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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(big hugggsssssssss) Oh Sharon, that is exactly why I have been so passionate about peace lately, it saddens me to see war being considered when I feel it would only create so much more violence and feel this could be the fuel for World War III if our leaders can't give it up! (sad sigh) I too wish for this ever so much, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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9 posted 2003-02-15 06:17 PM


beautiful write from a beautiful lady

[This message has been edited by passing shadows (02-16-2003 02:25 AM).]

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10 posted 2003-02-15 07:19 PM


Mysteria~ I sure like how you wish. I believe most all of us here wish for the same as you.

How wonderful the world would be
If we all could live in harmony
A perfect place for all to see
A wish A prayer A plea for all humanity

Enjoyed...Paul


"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

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11 posted 2003-02-15 07:31 PM


My dear friend......amen......
oh how I wish you would submit this for the new book....it belongs there.  

I must have had my momma's will
and Gods Amazing Grace...

I'm a survivor....
(Reba)

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12 posted 2003-02-15 07:48 PM


enjoyed
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Such beautiful wishes for all humanity....
I wish the same...and all your wishes, too, sweet Sharon....

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-15-2003 10:51 PM).]

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14 posted 2003-02-15 08:20 PM


IF I COULD HAVE A WISH I WOULD WISH THAT "YOUR" WISHES Would come true! Simply moving! Thank you!
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15 posted 2003-02-15 08:39 PM



Thank you kindly for reading this poem.  I wrote it at a time when we need some wishes to come true.  

I forgot to tick the box that says it is for the book submission so if you did by any chance come back to read and feel like voting that would be so nice, thank you.

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16 posted 2003-02-15 09:10 PM


Mysteria - a tick a tock, this poem for the book...

BC

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17 posted 2003-02-16 08:03 AM


So glad that you checked the lil box lady....now heres my vote!!
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18 posted 2003-02-16 10:33 AM


You have some world class wishes here dear lady. I will stand with you and hold your hand and pray all your wishes come true.

Huggles and luvs, Marti

'I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars.'

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19 posted 2003-02-16 03:01 PM


Thanks kindly everyone I appreciate your reading this, and let's start wishing okay?
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20 posted 2003-02-17 11:26 AM


How very beautiful! *S* I'll wish with you. *S*
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21 posted 2003-02-17 11:52 AM



Catching up on the best...
Thank you for bring Passions
to this site!

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22 posted 2003-02-17 12:57 PM


You dream of what been on your mind mostly through the day, or even some people say that your dreams are all part of the futer.. .. Nicley written poem.

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

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23 posted 2003-02-17 02:26 PM


If anyone can make their wishes come true, it's you.. Mysterias one...
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24 posted 2003-02-17 11:44 PM


Sharon,
And your wishes have been reality in my life. For which, I will always be grateful. Bless you and here's my vote.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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25 posted 2003-02-17 11:58 PM


Boootieful!

Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart.

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"I’d wish everyone we love were safe,
but should they leave we can say goodbye."


...me too...
loved this

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27 posted 2003-02-18 02:59 PM


I'd wish for lazer guns instead of hands.  Heh, just kidding.  You're quite the altruistic one, aren't you?  This is sweet, but know that wishes don't just come true... we have to make them come true, and what changes we can make in our short lives will inspire the hearts of others to carry on our ideals in generations thereafter.

It's the ripple effect... all it takes is a little action for all your wishes to come true, even if you're not alive to see them.  

Parasite

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~ Friedrich Wilhelm Nietzsche

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28 posted 2003-02-18 10:43 PM





giving you a star to wish upon

" ... And think not, that you can direct the course of love ...
if it finds you worthy ...  it then directs your course."

K.Gibran


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29 posted 2003-02-18 10:49 PM


Sharon--
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30 posted 2003-02-18 10:53 PM


I wish that you all get your wishes coming true for you, and thank you so kindly for reading my little poem I submitted.

          
~* Carpe' Diem *~  

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31 posted 2003-02-19 05:32 PM


Mysteria....this is a keeper.  I wish these things too.  I wish things seemingly sooo simple weren't so hard for us to achieve.  You write of truth and things everyone in this world desperatly needs!!!!

LOVELY!!!!

Bridgette

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32 posted 2003-02-20 01:06 AM


A lovely wish from a loving heart.  Joyce
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33 posted 2003-02-20 07:13 AM


Ah, Sharon. A mixture of wishes, dreams, and reality. Closing my eyes and wishing here as well. This is just lovely, my friend.

Best wishes and hugs,
/Kit

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34 posted 2003-02-20 09:42 PM


Your tender heart is genuinely expressed here I believe as I too share in these your wishes. Set apart from the many more complicated poems that I have read, I love the simplicity here in this poem and I think it would compliment the book very nicely.

-Bob

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35 posted 2003-02-21 12:45 PM


Mysteria - I pray your wishes do come true, my vote for you...

BC

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36 posted 2003-02-21 01:37 PM


I think if we all try really hard to be the best we can be to ourselves and each other anything is possible thank you folks for your kind replies.
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37 posted 2003-02-22 10:18 PM


This is so lovely, Mysteria. *s

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

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38 posted 2003-02-22 10:42 PM


Let those wishes shine on Mysteria, my vote is cast and the best to you


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39 posted 2003-02-22 10:56 PM


Wish on you two - it sure doesn't hurt!  I thank you kindly for reading as well.  
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40 posted 2003-02-22 11:15 PM


Of all human emotions, sincerity is one of our most honorable.  You show it so clearly in wishes we need every day.  Great job.  Ken J

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The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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41 posted 2003-02-22 11:19 PM


How your heart overflows with love...and the world would be a glorious place if all hearts were such as yours! Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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42 posted 2003-02-22 11:34 PM


KenJay finally I know you are male - and I love your poetry so I thank you for this compliment.

Ellie - You also spread your little love light well - thank you.

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43 posted 2003-02-23 06:25 PM


Beautiful heartfelt wishes, Sharon! You have a heart of gold, that's clear to see! It was great to talk with you last night on the phone! I hope my accent wasn't too disconcerting! Yours was lyrical, by the way! eh?!
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44 posted 2003-02-23 10:25 PM


Lyrical - me!  I love the idea of being lyrical and that is a poem right there Denise.  Thank you for reading my poem I appreciate it.
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Ah...wish away, Sharon...and may they all come true.
Hugs,
~Vicky

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you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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46 posted 2003-02-24 08:25 PM


You know the real beauty of this poem?? It's because I know you mean every word!! You are special, lady
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47 posted 2003-02-24 08:29 PM


Blessed You! It cheers me up. I'm one of the lonely and low self-esteem lost folks. Thanks so much

~Every girl has a dream within.

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48 posted 2003-02-24 10:57 PM


Michael, I started early with wishing on a star, and graduated to wishing on anything. I even wish for you to get "hole in ones" or is that "holes in one"

aries_luv_ppl it is for you I wish the hardest and the most often then.  May you see light in your darkness, and a smile tomorrow that warms your soul.

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49 posted 2003-02-25 11:39 AM


Sharon...here's wishing all your wishes come true
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50 posted 2003-02-26 12:38 PM


Ruth - wish with me and watch the changes we can make - thanks sweetie, it was nice talking to you at Liz's.
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52 posted 2003-02-26 05:47 PM


Munda coming from you I thank you kindly.

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