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I Have Been In Their Flutter
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I Have Been In Their Flutter |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada 
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 ~* I Have Been In Their Flutter *~ I have been in their flutter, and felt the warmth in their passing, so moved by the gentleness of a stroke on a tear-stained, cold cheek. Bitter ice began freezing my heart and I heard singing through my muted cries. So softly they spoke through that coldness warming and melting with words of love. They have held my hand in guidance leading me back from the ledge of life, to the very core of understanding and a calming sense of forgiveness. How overwhelmed we are when caught in their brilliance, refusing to be extinguished in the bowels of darkness. They accept us as genuine, unique, passing no judgment as they see through to the very core of us, into our hearts, and mend our souls. No wings or halos adorn their heads. There are no flowing white robes, or auras of light that draw you near but even still they are angels beckoning. They're in moccasins, army boots, dress shoes, some barefoot, rich or poor. In turbans, babushkas, loincloths or suits, and maybe someone you just met today. Yes, there are the angels on earth who will always keep the peace, for they all dance to the same tune, burnished in their souls through prayer, It is called ~* The Golden Rule *~ ~*~ ~*~ The Golden Rule ~*~ Do unto others As you would have them Do unto you This ethic of reciprocity is found in the scriptures of nearly every religion. It is often regarded as the most concise and general principle of ethics. It is a condensation in one principle of all longer lists of ordinances such as the Decalogue. The most valuable thing you own is a smile, wear it, and share it. Sharon  |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
And I quote: "Bitter ice began freezing my heart and I heard singing through my muted cries. So softly they spoke through that coldness warming and melting with words of love." that stanza were the emotions and images that lingered as I read the poem(as did the picture)....This piece...is beautiful We are the same...yet so different.... this was a perfect choice for submission Regina "heaven truley knows that thou art false as hell...one that loved not wisely,but too well..she swore..'twas a strange ,'twas passing strange"-othello |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
What a beautiful, sweet piece... you have my vote! Peace I leave with you, My peace I give unto you: not as the world giveth, give I unto you.--Jesus Christ |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
I like the moral of this... it is indeed true that often the most overlooked angels are the ones that live on earth and operate on their own morals, of their own will. You did a good job keeping this mysterious through most of the poem without giving away the "they" too easily. Nice work.  Parasite "Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is perfect. Sharon, could you email me about the requirements to submit here for the new book. I've been gone Sandra |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Knocked my socks off!! (I hope some day we can have a book with graphics - this picture fits the poem so well!) |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sharon, this is really a touching poem. I'm like the other Sharon, it would be good if this picture could be put in the book with the poem. It adds to it a lot.......  "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-15-2003 03:59 PM).] |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
Dearest Sharon, Loved this, whole-heartedly agreed with it. There will always be angels garbed in mortality. They are the hope of Humanity. Slow to judge, quick to rescue and all acknowledge that a smile, kind word and gentle action will eventually melt the glacier that is the human condition. Cherish the good memories of the past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. But above all... be kind to yourself today. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) God Bless You, sweet friend, this so deeply touched my heart as there are so many real angels out there who struggle and strive to hang on yet they have so much strength and resilience and with their understanding of pain and compassion can reach out to so many, just like you! (big hugggssssssss) I believe the Golden Rule is the simple creed that we should bear as an anthem, to love each other and treat each other like we deserve to be treated! This is so heartfelt, sweet friend, and heartfelt poems are always a vote in my book, yay, you are atrue angel, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-15-2003 01:35 AM).] |
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christian Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 331 |
each stanza here was so heartfelt, and just honest. i felt as if you really poured youre heart out when writing this poem. when i get a vibe like that from reading a poem, then i know it's something beyond just average poetry. you've got my vote. thanks for writing this, i enjoyed it. -chris. |
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christian Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 331 |
sorry, posting again. i forgot to vote, :smirk: |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Sharon....I am amazed at how you have grown as a poet in the time you've been here at passions. For someone who once couldn't da da, this poem flows smmother than butter on a hot day I absolutely love everything about it and would vote for it twice if I could |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
There is only one thing that annoys me about you---and that is that you always undermine your talent. This is lovely and gently, and always you remind me, that gentle words can have an impact, as well as the rage I seem to spout out. I strive for that goal. Thanks, you POET. smile. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
How could I not vote for this beautiful gift of your heart dear Sharon Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Very lovely *s |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Another amazing write from you. BEAUTIFUL! Charisma |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You can turn just about anything into angels, can'tcha, m'friend...  |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Yes, Nan, she can! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
A perfect choice for submission to the book, Sharon. This is excellent, my friend. Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
the moth is late..but trying to catch up... perfect choice to represent you in the book poetess Sharon " ... And think not, that you can direct the course of love ... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Thank you one and all - you are all angels in your own way did you know that? Everyone has wings they just have to use them and fly! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sharon, I hope to always live ty it myself. Wonderful write. Gets my vote. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this so very much, Mysteria... Even if there was no book, I'd be looking for a way to vote for it... absolutely excellent! *S* |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Wonderful choice, Sharon. This is beautiful. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Larry, Suthern, two angels I already know see how many there are? Thanks you two flutter away. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh Vicky you snuck in here while I was doing a response, and now you know your opinion means a lot to me I hope, so thank you sweet poetess. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This so deserves to be in the book. A stunning write. my votes in. Maree |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Dark Angel - thank you for your vote of confidence I do appreciate. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Still love this one a votes worth, and more.  |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I'm finally back on line and so happy to vote for your lovely poem. You know thatI know there is an angel or two on Passions. Joyce |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I'm voting for this one....Beautiful!!!! Bridgette |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Martie, Joyce and Justbleu, thank you for your nice remarks on this piece. I enjoyed writing this one as it was truly from experience. Thanks again. |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
SUCH A WONDERFUL WRITE! ~Every girl has a dream within. |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
The depth of this poem is amazing. So Rich. I've read it several times already and each time I've read it I've gotten more insight from it. Perhaps this poem is related to what is written that some have entertained angels unaware... Not that we are unaware of having angels in our presence, but that we have entertained those of whom you write; the humble, the meek, the honest, those who abide by the golden rule, etc. etc.... who are angels in the eyes of God, but but by their nature and character have no awareness of how very precious they truly are. (Amen) I do feel, as you have written, that there are so many angels all around us dear poet friend. Angels that have no idea of their high status in Heaven though how very very much they are angels here on earth. Thank you for this beautiful and insightful poem. God bless. -Bob |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This is truly an exemplary piece of writing. It has everything! Warm hugs, EA |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
How wonderful you are my friends, and Bob you nailed what I was trying to say right on the head. These angels are truly unaware of how much they will change a person's life by just a simple touch, smile, or personal contact. I know so many and they tend to rub off on you after a while. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
So true, Sharon. You've expressed it beautifully! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sharon, You say everything so well, and you have so much to relate through your richness of experiences, and we always learn. THis is splendid Liz |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You two being dear friends that you are have become others in flutter to me. Thank you for taking the time to read this. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Mysteria~ I don't know how I missed this touching poem, but I'm glad that I came upon it tonight. Thanks for sharing...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Forgive me for missing this one. It is by far your best, not only for the title for the truth behind the words and the knowledge that you live them....beautiful writing  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Mysteria - you do write them well. My vote is in. By the way, I just changed computer's and have lost the ICQ... But I'm back online with it... BC |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well gentlemen thank you kindly and Balladeer - you kissed my cheek - how sweet of you! Bill, I deleted that silly ICQ sorry, but there is always email don't loose us now. |
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