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Amature2
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0 posted 2003-03-07 08:39 AM



Morning Dew

On petals of blue
Caressed by the Morning Dew
Beauty I call you

"This we know - the Earth does not belong to man - man belongs to the Earth." Chief Seattle

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2003-03-07 08:41 AM


I love that morning dew! It's a delightful, spritely brew!

Have a glorious day!

Earth Angel

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2 posted 2003-03-07 09:38 AM


Lovely, lovely! Sparkling, glistening dew...a beautiful thing.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Elizabeth Santos
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3 posted 2003-03-07 09:50 AM


LOvely morning thoughts. I am just trying some haiku. It's harder to write three lines than six verses of rhyme!
You did a good job of it
Liz

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4 posted 2003-03-07 10:46 AM


*s  nice
M

INclan
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5 posted 2003-03-07 05:16 PM


Ah, a good senryu.

INclan

rkcraig
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6 posted 2003-03-07 05:26 PM


very creative and such great imagery in only 3 lines!
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7 posted 2003-03-07 05:56 PM


Absolutely beautiful!!!!  

Hugs,
Ethel

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vandana
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9 posted 2003-03-08 06:59 PM


enjoyed
Margherita
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10 posted 2003-03-08 07:05 PM


Just lovely!
Margherita

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11 posted 2003-03-09 04:29 PM






(smiles) Oh Raphael, this is a beautiful vision, sweet friend, I love the morning dew and that is just one reason spring is my favorite time of year, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Raphael, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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