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KoKo
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since 2003-02-15
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Inside the shadow's shadow

0 posted 2003-04-11 10:29 PM


I just can't seem to grip this
Your every kiss
Is memorable.
I can't seem to hold this
Moment in my arms
For ever
And ever
And may forever
Never
Fade
Away.
I can't seem to love you
Enough,
I thought
I'd bust
Wide open in your arms
From the love that fills my lungs
Each time I inhale
And resonates...
It will never go away.
No bother...
Resonated love
Leaves a taste
Of your lips
On my own
When you're gone.
And I relive
Your kisses
Over and over
And I pray
On my knees
That forever
Will never
Fade
Away.


I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

[This message has been edited by KoKo (04-11-2003 10:36 PM).]

© Copyright 2003 Lauren - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-04-11 10:34 PM


resonates

I enjoyed this read KoKo

KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow
2 posted 2003-04-11 10:34 PM


Hey, thanks! I knew it didn't look right to me!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2003-04-11 10:38 PM


you are welcome, as I knew you didn't mean plastic love
resinate=plastic residue

KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow
4 posted 2003-04-11 10:39 PM


Hehehe, thanks again...

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

carol
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since 2003-01-25
Posts 624
Florida USA
5 posted 2003-04-11 11:08 PM


KoKo,this is very nice

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

Edder
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since 2003-04-02
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6 posted 2003-04-12 01:29 AM


good job on this one hon.
lost_star
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7 posted 2003-04-12 01:32 AM


Great Job!
KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow
8 posted 2003-04-12 09:45 AM


Thank you much carol, Eddles, and lost_star! ^_^

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

vandana
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9 posted 2003-04-12 07:16 PM


enjoyed
Sunnyone
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10 posted 2003-04-12 07:19 PM


Koko, if you believe in it, forever will be yours!!  Great write, my friend!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~~S~~

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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11 posted 2003-04-13 01:27 AM


Lauren:

And I pray
On my knees
That forever
Will never
Fade


this sings - I loved it! nice write
xxoo

passing shadows
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displaced
12 posted 2003-04-13 02:24 AM


just beautiful thoughts!
JamesMichael
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13 posted 2003-04-14 05:32 PM


Know what you mean...James
KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow
14 posted 2003-04-14 06:42 PM


Thank you all very, very much

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

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