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Open Poetry #25

Peeling Away, dark again

LastMoments
Member

since 2003-03-07

Posts 92

0 posted 2003-03-07 01:02 AM

Peeling Away

Echoing inside like whispers
Your face won't go away
It waits behind like setting shadows
As time feeds on the day

Translucent to my inner self
Have times left you behind
In this fog of the forgotten
That leaves you lone and blind

I walked the path we once held
Remember the stars that lit
The thousand dreams we lived within
That none other could take or fit

It's all a piece of figment time
That matches in a sight
That lived a shattered wish in whole
That faded in the light

I held my hand to meet your heart
To hold, forever cherish
Broken touch, my hand now bleeds
A thorn to skin in perish

I touched a darkened soul
That took a time and drown
The hope it fed to stay alive
In rest without a sound

Resting, while inside I feel apart, peeling away

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-03-07 02:03 AM

Last Moments - Welcome to PIP! -
hehehe I am new as well -

This is amazing - excellent lines here:

I held my hand to meet your heart
To hold, forever cherish
Broken touch, my hand now bleeds
A thorn to skin in perish

Powerful - keep posting xxoo

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

2 posted 2003-03-08 09:14 AM

Hi LastMoments,

This was truly enjoyable, I look for ward to more of your work and a very big welcome to Passions.

Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

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