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the_loner_23
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-03-06 11:26 PM


From Liam's viewpoint.
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The color red
Is my favorite color
The color I see
Everytime
I make you blush

The color red
Is the color
Of your cute nose
In winter
When the wind
Whips up

The color red
Is the color
Of my favorite
part of your anatomy
Your heart

The color red
Will be the color
Of your flowers
In our wedding
In the future
A dozen red roses
Is what I hope for
For your bouqet

The color red
I shall always love

Cold hands means a warm heart

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ThunderMage
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1 posted 2003-03-06 11:27 PM


You got it dead-on Julie.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!
We do not stop playing because we grow ol

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2 posted 2003-03-06 11:43 PM


My new favorite color is RED... very nicely done.
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