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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-03-06 11:11 PM





say something,
don't just smile at me,
winking that wink,
pretty delivery man,

it's been one or two,
years of you,
breezing thru
60 seconds alloted,
each stop,
time spent on
the bossman's clock,

60 seconds of
unbridled passion
eyes meeting eyes,
stories written in
a minutes time,

shy one,
time is cliking away,
it's coming soon,
do or die,

i'm still an
old fashioned girl,
tho my looks deceive,

say something quick,
before
they change your route,
or i fly this coup,

how will you find me,
or i find you,

delivery man,
i see your band of gold,
its okay,
i wear one too

say something soon


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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-03-06 11:13 PM


Awesome write

Cold hands means a warm heart

Ringo
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since 2003-02-20
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Saluting with misty eyes
2 posted 2003-03-06 11:16 PM


Those we can't have are the worst ones to want...and the ones we seem to want most...
Good write.

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT
3 posted 2003-03-07 01:41 AM


Hmmmm .... perhaps he is too tied up!
   Be careful, you might find a notice of postage overdue someday!

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia
4 posted 2003-03-07 02:56 AM


Mmmmmm a nod and a wink , sure makes one think ,what can  say , flirting cam lead one astray LOL
Hope

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2003-03-07 04:28 PM


Enjoyed...Is this just flirting or do you really want a special delivery...James
rkcraig
Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202
Cincinnati, Ohio, USA
6 posted 2003-03-07 05:10 PM


i really enjoyed this one
Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
7 posted 2003-03-07 06:46 PM


inkedgoddess - hang in there one more morning, I just received my delivery uniform, and will be there tomorrow...

BC

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
8 posted 2003-03-07 07:06 PM


yes, bill, and will u still put in some overtime too?
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
9 posted 2003-03-08 03:30 AM


I will just say I like this...and plead the fifth
Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

10 posted 2003-03-08 10:39 AM


Great poem!
Eric

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