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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-03-06 10:24 PM

Swallowed into whirlpool drowns, gulped of brines, stripped of grounds
I close my eyes, transported sighs and shivers, a towel warm in essence quivers

Settled in another frame, familiar though by smile and so, and welcomed all the same
I watch the way you walk, carefully to note and tune, in shades of soft on pillow talk

Sweet rain into my eyes, transparent to my soul, in trembled fingers graze on thighs
I touch your palm with captivated pulse, as rivers rush the moon, in demitasse convulse

Swallowed into seas surround, contoured in the lace of least, safely harbored by the
Sound
I close my eyes, to meadow scents in pale advents, and quaking leaves adrift belies

Copyright Kkh 3/6/03

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2003-03-06 10:37 PM

Oh my!!! TD, this is wonderful...love the new form..like freedom, it explodes!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2003-03-06 10:38 PM

mystical, magical, beautiful, if only love like this can sustain, but sometimes, the dream is even better

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

3 posted 2003-03-07 06:16 AM

Oh my! This is wonderful. I love the last two stanzas, especially.

And, this line is awesome:

"as
rivers rush the moon,
in demitasse convulse"

Incredible poem!

Hugs. Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2003-03-07 05:03 PM

The new TD...an interesting write with
inner rhyme....nicely done..

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-03-07 05:05 PM

Brilliant, Kathleen. I like the romantic
theme with the inner ryhme, too. Beautiful,
it is, Lady...

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

6 posted 2003-03-07 05:22 PM

you don't post enough! or have i just been missing your posts? beautiful visions.

lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

7 posted 2003-03-07 06:40 PM

ThisDiamond - beautiful things can be seen, when closing ones eyes. Nice write...

BC

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2003-03-08 03:36 AM

what imagery!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2003-03-08 04:59 PM

(smiles) Oh Kathleen, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I too love to dream ever so much as there is so much we don't see with our eyes open and sometimes I just wish I could live and fathom there! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

10 posted 2003-03-08 06:48 PM

delicate and sweet, and graceful in its rhythm--this is the language of love and made me smile.

enjoyed this very much TD!

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