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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2003-03-06 10:14 PM


OnA Night Like This
~*~

I remember
fire light
on crazy nights
like this...
when your eyes
drew me close,
and when you touched my lips
with yours...
the things we said.
Though another year has gone by
a thousand thoughts of you
will come to me in dreams,
and the music of your laughter
will always serenade me...
always.
In the night you’ll find me
in my dreams,
and in yours.
Your face,
your smile,
your lips...
on nights like this
you'll find me.
So I cannot grieve
for what might have been,
because I believe
somewhere,
someday,
you'll find me
again


~*~
BloomingRose


© Copyright 2003 DebraS. - All Rights Reserved
inkedgoddess
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1 posted 2003-03-06 10:43 PM




hope he'll find you in dreams again, nice thoughts and wishes

Sunshine
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2 posted 2003-03-06 10:44 PM



Deb!  You've been away so long!  Welcome home!  Please, check into Reflections, soon...we need to know that you'll submit one of your lovely poems!  

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3 posted 2003-03-06 11:23 PM


Here's hoping you will meet again...
I thoroughly enjoyed this...

garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-03-07 01:37 AM


Debra, this is beautiful. have you put a
book submission in yet? I'll be looking for it.....

Hugs,
Ethel

littlewing
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5 posted 2003-03-07 02:31 AM


This is amazing!  I feel like this often - bittersweet xxoo
Janet Marie
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6 posted 2003-03-07 11:36 AM


lovely subtle sensual memories of meant to bes....well done poetess of the Rose
and yes Ms Deb...where is your book submission?

    
peace & poetry

passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-03-08 04:19 AM


awesome writing!
Margherita
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8 posted 2003-03-08 04:34 AM


Very beautiful, sweet longing.
Margherita

sea_of_okc
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9 posted 2003-03-08 04:38 AM


If he doesn't find you come find me!
Beatifully written.

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2003-03-08 04:56 AM


Love this...one of my favorites...filled with so much desire...James
BloomingRose
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11 posted 2003-03-08 09:24 AM


Thank you!


Deb

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12 posted 2003-03-08 04:42 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Debra, this is so beautiful but sad, sweet friend, always believe in your heart and anything is possible, sweet friend, this must be in Reflections, I would happily vote for it, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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