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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-03-06 09:25 PM



Hope

hope
is a thing
tied to
a string
that I
fly
at the end
of my
night

"Don't let the mistakes of your past be the journey of your future."


© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
1 posted 2003-03-06 10:05 PM


watch those trees, i get tangled in there too often
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2003-03-06 11:01 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA
3 posted 2003-03-07 06:40 PM


Helen. i love what i see. great sentiments.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
4 posted 2003-03-07 07:49 PM


Beautifully said .... to begin the new day with hope is the best we can do ...
Margherita

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
5 posted 2003-03-07 11:18 PM



Helen - if only that string had a balloon at the other end huh?  Liked this a lot - great writing xxoo

DonFurr
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since 2001-01-01
Posts 172
Monticello IN
6 posted 2003-03-08 12:49 PM


May it always fly high

"If there is any doubt about it there is no doubt about it." Linnie Stanton


passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
7 posted 2003-03-08 02:10 AM


yeah!
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