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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
Days* There are mirrors too often in which I see patterns that I did not cut but must abide knowing well what happens next is green is yellow is fading to black Could I attempt my own rebirth at this late date or would I merely layer fresh bark to a hollowing trunk collapsing into itself *(2) © 030603 |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
not in a questioning mood, are we now?  I'm just glad your questioning brings about such great poetry as this. I do like this alot. Especially that first image of the mirror showing the (ahh how did you phrase it) patterns you didn't cut... something liek that.. really good. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - (blink, breathe, stand, fight) [This message has been edited by GG (03-06-2003 09:00 PM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
an interesting introspection... funny how hollow one can feel... bark or not.. enjoyed |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
There are mirrors too often in which I see patterns that I did not cut but must abide This is the first of your poems i have come accross, and i'm impressed. it has a depth, i like your style. i'm putting this in my library. lots of love, gemma xxxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
like the style |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your writing makes us think... this is a good thing... |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Very beautiful.. Thank you much for sharing.  Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yes, every day is a good day to be reborn and you are bound to find that comfort to fill your heart! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, always listen to you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
glider - this is just brilliant - I think that too often myself - xxoo |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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