more nothin' (Wind's challenge)

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Open Poetry #25

more nothin' (Wind's challenge)

wandering glider
Senior Member

since 2001-04-04

Posts 501
aloft

0 posted 2003-03-06 06:44 PM

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I put it in parentheses
so you'll know just where to look
Though it might be too invisible
to make it to "the book"

I wrote it just so carefully
in a form you'll recognize
And hope that to my chosen words
you'll award your Challenge Prize

But if some other nothing verse
better suits your judge's eye
I will not shout and will not pout
'cause I gave it one good try!

w.g.

Amara
Member

since 2003-02-23

Posts 158
East of the moon, west of the sun.

1 posted 2003-03-06 07:16 PM

Good job! I say you did a grand ol' job...I considered that one myself, but had no ideas...nothing came to mind! (Excuse the pun, I'm in a giddy mood.)

Anyhow, I like it. Congrats!

That's what we, as heroes, do. We live as if the world were like it should be, to show the world what it could be.

Phantom Poet
Member

since 2003-03-03

Posts 116
Arizona USA

2 posted 2003-03-06 07:31 PM

Enjoyed your write!! and thoughts!!
>>phantom poet<<

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

3 posted 2003-03-06 07:33 PM

A very original way to write about nothing...
Enjoyed.

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